The Fifty Cent Tour

Monday, October 29, 2012

pure

we love
pure, sacred
unguarded 

hearts racing
like raindrops
down windowpanes

every touch,
kiss and cry 
a biblical deluge

we love
pure, sacred
infinite

our past
cleansed
immaculate

our future
ignited,
alive


Rene~2013

Image via Magpie Tales

20 comments:

  1. yes! more, please! and hang tough for the storm, Rene. xo

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    1. Thanks Marian
      Lucky we are not bearing the brunt of it

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  2. Rene, your poem is lovely. I am sitting in an airport in the Midwest ... thankful I'm heading west!

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  3. Oh wonderful Rene.

    our past
    cleansed...

    our future
    ignited...

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    1. Thank you Mary.
      Those two stanzas were the hardest to write Believe it or not

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  4. smiles...now that is some kiss, and some love...love the spiritual elements of this rene...

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  5. So much I like about this one. The first two stanzas are my favorites.

    =)

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  6. This is so true of how love can be....lovely Rene!!

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  7. This is very lovely and very loving!

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  8. This piece is ALIVE! In it's purity there is the only true perfection to be found. Fantastic share!

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  9. Perhaps you have struck on the true metaphysical meaning of the great flood. Had beers with an irish blke from dublin the other day , god he was funny !

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  10. I love this.....I'm always so in awe of people who can do poetry.

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