in the sublime
sanctuary
of your arms
lives Eden,
unabridged
my will of iron rusts
of your arms
lives Eden,
unabridged
my will of iron rusts
crumbling into
sweat
making a paste
of ash and honey
you dip your finger
you dip your finger
and paint the day
bright expectant
the night
clear triumphant
your bosom heavy
with sustenance
bright expectant
the night
clear triumphant
your bosom heavy
with sustenance
for searchers
a pillow
for slumber treasure
your heart
a pillow
for slumber treasure
your heart
is a place
where both good
where both good
and evil
sip from the same cup
and die by the same fire
Rene ~ August 2012
For Magpie Tales
Image credit ( via Magpie Tales)
Andrew Wyeth, 1948
"The Big Room"
sip from the same cup
and die by the same fire
Rene ~ August 2012
For Magpie Tales
Image credit ( via Magpie Tales)
Andrew Wyeth, 1948
"The Big Room"
I like what you write. Let's talk poetry one day. I'm curious about your writing.
ReplyDeletethanks Neil :)
ReplyDeletethis is a place
ReplyDeletewhere good and evil
sip from the same cup
and die by the same fire...nice...really like that closing stanza rene, they seem to coexist well in many places these days...
Could I get a movie trailer voice over artist to read this? Because that would spank my buttons.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian, for always being here :)
spank your buttons....smiles.....
DeleteBeautiful...the lintel of the heart...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Tess for all you do to get Magpies out into the world every week without fail.
DeleteI love this poem Rene. It is life and it is family. It is home. Thank you for sharing these truths. =D
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda. It is my pleasure.
DeleteThat last stanza especially is a Bam!Pow! experience, and the whole thing one hell of a write! Wow!
ReplyDeleteIG, I don't have any money to pay you for all the !!!! marks :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, sunbae :)
(bowing) You honor me, madam. Payment? Why, you have already given it to me in the currency of your poetry. Quite a fair exchange, I think.
Deleteshyly blushing :)
Deletewow!! this is brilliant...love the 'a will of iron
ReplyDeleteturns to a paste of ash and nectar'...sublime..x
Kay! Thank you for stopping in and I'm glad you enjoyed that line.
DeleteFascinating how you honed in on the architectural element of the lintel ... used it to great advantage.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen, You don't even know how long I've been waiting to use the word lintel :)
DeleteNice. Limited time today so found myself reading a few at random. Felt this one. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThank you, Winston. You have many poets to choose from but yet you chose me :) I appreciate you coming by.
DeleteRene this is magnificent.....so many wonderful lines in this!!
ReplyDeleteI honored that you enjoyed it, Carrie. I just love your work.
DeleteSuperb write.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]