look into these eyes
these cracked soul windows
locked and fully loaded
with madman promise
all for you, baby
all for you
you just don't know it
not now, not yet
but come tomorrow?
you'll be on your knees
praying for yesterday
just to be the first in line
to stake your claim
to capture the fire
to inspire envy
to breathe the lie
Rene ~ March 2012
For Magpie Tales
Image by Sarolta Ban
these cracked soul windows
locked and fully loaded
with madman promise
all for you, baby
all for you
you just don't know it
not now, not yet
but come tomorrow?
you'll be on your knees
praying for yesterday
just to be the first in line
to stake your claim
to capture the fire
to inspire envy
to breathe the lie
Rene ~ March 2012
For Magpie Tales
Image by Sarolta Ban
huh, had to back out to your main page to be able to leave a comment...
ReplyDeletenot sure i completely follow...but if your powers of suggestion work...and i wake up clucking like a chicken...its not going to be good...
smiles.
always nice to see you at OLN ma'am...smiles.
DeleteWhoa! That's a smack up side the head Renee. A good one!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your poem!
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Locked and loaded for sure....love this Rene! :-)
ReplyDeletePraying for yesterday? Sheesh!
ReplyDeleteSteamy!
ReplyDeleteFirst in line?
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, I will KILL to be first in line.
A little bit of noir. I enjoy that hard-kmockin, no nonsense gravitas. You get it here in spades (so to speak). Nicely spun words and write.
ReplyDeleteI like the atmosphere you created here using narrative, dialog and repetition with the to:… at the end. nice piece. thanks
ReplyDeleteWell said! Lots of passion in this!
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I especially like "madman promise"...well done Rene...
ReplyDeleteholy mama. this rocks - uber confident. precise and to the point.
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