Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
smiles...not quite reality eh?
ReplyDeleteNot everyday :) Thanks Brian, for always stopping by. No matter the weather.
ReplyDeleteit happens to the best
ReplyDeleteyou are in good company
and I understood it all
thank you Suz. No, I am never lonely at being alone :)
ReplyDeleteI really like (b/c I know that feeling):
ReplyDeletethe right words cliff dive
off the tip of my tongue
Isn't it great when that happens?
DeleteThanks Laurie!
"i call my lovers and fears to the table by their proper names"
ReplyDeleteI love this line. So often we sugar coat the true names of lovers and fears. Honesty just feels good.
So does courage, my love :)
DeleteThanks Crystal
So many awesome lines in this Rene!!! You have such an amazing talent!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Carrie
ReplyDeleteLovely, and the image really adds to the poetry!
ReplyDeleteAww thank you!
Deleteunderwater, undercover
ReplyDeletelife does flow without a struggle
and the right words cliff dive
off the tip of my tongue
Excellent!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it
Deletethe right words cliff dive
ReplyDeleteoff the tip of my tongue
I love this!
Thank you so much Kathe
DeleteLyrical...lovely...
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it, Tess. Thanks for coming by.
Delete'Swim for their supper'. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank you Helena
ReplyDeletei am never, ever disappointed by you.
ReplyDeletexoxox
That Is like the best thing I've ever heard :)
ReplyDeleteSo lovely--I beamed from inside!
ReplyDelete@AudreyHowitt
Great write, Rene ... we must all sound like divas under water, don't you think?
ReplyDeleteMysterious and seductive.
ReplyDeleteA great mysterious feel indeed. the last stanza really stood out, but liked the notion of underwater undercover too, great verse
ReplyDeleteSuch fun...like blowing bubbles through your nose!
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