she serves it
raw
not for the timid
she socks it to you
straight
you chase her
you fall
tripping
on the corner of her eye
her fair game
caught up in
raw
not for the timid
she socks it to you
straight
you chase her
you fall
tripping
on the corner of her eye
her fair game
caught up in
a midnight dragnet
no stories, no way out
no names
just safe words
Rene ~ January 2012
For Magpie Tales
~
Miss Wasabi don't hold hands!
you want that?
go to noodle house.
no stories, no way out
no names
just safe words
Rene ~ January 2012
For Magpie Tales
~
Miss Wasabi don't hold hands!
you want that?
go to noodle house.
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Oh yeah...you socked it to me...
ReplyDeleteMission accomplished
DeleteI'll have some of what she's serving, thank you! Uh huh.
ReplyDeleteWalk on the wild side of the noodle house , then
Deletesnort...the second little bit there about made me spit out my coffee...
ReplyDeletesmiles.
Sorry about that. Coffee is precious
Deletebrilliant magpie!!..the last bit made me laugh out loud!!
ReplyDeleteI was hoping for that :)
DeleteI liked the sound of this.
ReplyDeleteThank you !
Deleteyou're fair game
ReplyDeletein her midnight dragnet
Help! Save me! LOL
You chased her :)
Deletefalse words?
ReplyDeletewow.
lovely entry.
You can use any words you want.
DeleteThank you.
Brilliant...
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteI enjoyed this.....I like it when a woman 'socks' it at some point of the piece...lol.....!
ReplyDeleteHeh!
DeleteNice. I love the "midnight dragnet".
ReplyDeleteIt's both frightening and seductive, no?
DeleteHate the picture--enjoyed the poem. esp the noodle house crack.
ReplyDeleteThis picture prompt was not my favourite either, to be honest. But I liked the challenge.
DeleteLOL awesome words ... last part made me smile :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant stuff - I was totally lost with this prompt.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
You weren't alone Anna. This was a tough prompt.
ReplyDeleteOMG, I laughed aloud at the haiku!!
ReplyDelete(And the poem? Reminds me of that wait for spring to appear...)
Pearl
Aw thanks Pearl. And I, like you, am waiting not so patiently for spring to arrive.
ReplyDeleteThis was great Rene. I love a little haiku humor.
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