she serves it up
raw
not to the timid
she socks it to you
straight
you chase her
you fall
tripping
on the corner of her eye
fair game
caught up
in her midnight dragnet
no stories, no way out
no names
just safe words
Rene ~ January 2012
For Magpie Tales
~
Miss Wasabi don't hold hands!
you want that?
go to noodle house.

27 pennies in the hat:
Oh yeah...you socked it to me...
I'll have some of what she's serving, thank you! Uh huh.
snort...the second little bit there about made me spit out my coffee...
smiles.
brilliant magpie!!..the last bit made me laugh out loud!!
I liked the sound of this.
you're fair game
in her midnight dragnet
Help! Save me! LOL
false words?
wow.
lovely entry.
You can use any words you want.
Thank you.
You chased her :)
Thank you !
I was hoping for that :)
Sorry about that. Coffee is precious
Walk on the wild side of the noodle house , then
Mission accomplished
Brilliant...
I enjoyed this.....I like it when a woman 'socks' it at some point of the piece...lol.....!
Nice. I love the "midnight dragnet".
Hate the picture--enjoyed the poem. esp the noodle house crack.
Thank you very much!
Heh!
It's both frightening and seductive, no?
This picture prompt was not my favourite either, to be honest. But I liked the challenge.
Brilliant stuff - I was totally lost with this prompt.
Anna :o]
You weren't alone Anna. This was a tough prompt.
OMG, I laughed aloud at the haiku!!
(And the poem? Reminds me of that wait for spring to appear...)
Pearl
Aw thanks Pearl. And I, like you, am waiting not so patiently for spring to arrive.
This was great Rene. I love a little haiku humor.
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