Lunch, George Tooker, 1964, Columbus Museum of Art |
windshield wipers
high five neon
just around the bend
a place to rest an elbow
and fill an empty rumble
take a place
among the same boat
hungry anonymous
what'll ya have, hon?
besides the coffee I mean
tired eyes and shoulders
shroud spoonfuls of
sighs and secrets
eating words
sipping scenery
miles to go before sleep
how 'bout a warmup
for your soul to keep
red eyed Jesus
in a styrofoam cup
carry you home soon
soon enough
carry you home soon
soon enough
Rene ~ December 2011
For Magpie Tales
photo by Rene for Magpie Tales |
i am always down for coffee...sipping scenery...love that...love to just sit and sip the surroundings...
ReplyDeleteThis is most excellent. I like the manner in which you said what you said.
ReplyDeletesippin scenery is lovely. I like the feel of this piece. Truly wonderful.
ReplyDelete.. like the flavor of this Mag. Especially the last stanza, neat!
ReplyDeleteYes to sippery scenery. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteHungry anonymous- aren't we all? Love your writing Rene- spot on as always!
ReplyDeleteLove this Rene....perfect!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Especially on this day where *clearly* more coffee is required!
ReplyDeleteLong drive well captured.
ReplyDeletewish i can put a melody to this... love it!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
Sometimes I see a red-eyed Jesus in the rear view mirror...he's a gone daddy.
ReplyDeleteGood 'un, doll.
Love it! Your poem reminded me of Janet Evanovich :)
ReplyDeleteThat was one LONG journey you captured there...
ReplyDeleteSuch journeying ...
ReplyDeletefine poem
Well done. "red-eyes Jesus".. stroke of genius.
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