gas station daisies...cool description that...must have been a wild one last night...smiles.
panty twistedand panda eyedfresh as gas station daisies...still, what a description...ha...i remember this one....good to see you rene...smiles.
..panda eyedfresh as gas station daisies...oh my...sounds like quite the morning after the party..smiles
The attitude, you got it. Love the second and last stanzas especially.
You got this down right and bright. Brassy and tight with a lovely, somewhat hidden, self-ironic smile. That wild thirst to walk that edge of misshapen dreams and throttle the experience till it begs you to let go, got me seeing the sashay and spin on a dime of stilletto heels.
wild girlswild storygreat ending
wild voice.. i like it specially these lines:we've left hand printsin the cementjust like Hollywood, babyprint that
Still love this on second reading ~
Wild youth, like a hot rock band (The Runaways, maybe). This is beautifully written. 1 2 3 BOOM, for real.
Great depiction of wild!
On second read through this still leaves an impression. A great one to showcase.
Ohmuhgaw...I am LOVIN this. Love the panda eyes, the gas station daisies, the sunstaring, the stilettoed squirrels, and just the whole in-your-face, up yours 'tude of the thing. Girls just wanna have fun, 2011 style.
Captured well! Beautifully shared.
Ha! Sounded like the girls had a great time! Great post!
haha..."gas station daisies" Sounds like quite a morning after stemming from quite the night before! :)
Like it very much. It moves like the day.
love everything about this one. Those were the days Rene!
Love it, Rene!
Jesus you're good.....
I came back and downloaded it. It's brilliant. I think you should be world famous.
My kind of night...once!
It smells of a kerosene leak, and each stanza has a zippo at the ready
"teeterin'like stiletto'd squirrels"love the descriptions--all of them. it definitely sounds as though there was plenty of fun!
Sharp and full of bite, poetry that's alive!
super, luscious, un-repentant, splendid images...squirrels in stilletoes- very, very nice!
Reminds me of Lush Life and the Ladies Who Lunch..well my mind turns to music and you made this musical - fresh as gas station daisies, stilleto'd squirrels, high wire and hands in cement. I think I've met one or two of these along the way! This was a hoot & a holler. Definitely one of the best of the year!!
Gas station daisies. Wow, you snagged me with that image.
feisty imagery with rhythm
Excellent imagery in a fine exciting write - much enjoyed.Anna :o]
Great to revisit this one (I'm Chromapoesy) and it is feisty and well written.
"Ya lookin' at me? Ya talkin' to me?Who d'ya think ya are?"Rene, this poem has attitude - and it's great.
Party on, as they would say. Like your descriptive words on this write.
Great style in this.
Panty-twisted and panda eyed... danger know us... handprints at the bottom... you paint a clear picture of the vodka girls, Rene. The question for many? Save them or join them?http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/02/22/it-is-written-vehicles-of-the-word/
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