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| The Snake Charmer, Henri Rousseau 1907 courtesy of Tess Kincaid for Magpie Tales |
full moon on the shores
of where the cat brought
your tongue
to lisp all gutters licorice
with squirming, swearing
sons of guns
lead 'em down the asp hole
charmin' little asp hole
every town's got an asp hole
a shiny little asp hole
kick 'em in the asp hole
'til the deed is done
Rene ~ September 2011
hahaha...nice lisp...lol
ReplyDeletefun play on the old saying...smiles.
rad.
ReplyDeleteKick em in the asp hole? hahaha! Very clever. I giggled.
ReplyDeleteHee hee...this one's singable...
ReplyDeleteTo paraphrase Courage Wolf..."Fall into asp hole, climb out with new jacket!"
ReplyDeleteheh.
I think Tess is right: it's singable.
OMG >> OMG!
ReplyDeleteHehehe... Good play on the old saying!
ReplyDeleteNice nice...
JJRod'z
Clever piece! Love the lisp.
ReplyDeleteHaha,such an innovative take!
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
Rene, ya goof. :-)
ReplyDeletePearl
Crisp!
ReplyDeleteI did like the opening stanza! LOL. Thanks
ReplyDeleteHahahaha! Excellent! This is my favorite!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]