"Endeavor", Lino Tagliapietra, Columbus Museum of Art Courtesy of Tess Kincaid for Magpie Tales |
glide through the eye
of a ruby kaleidoscope
sail from river to sky
gone in sixty seconds
greet the moon
with a two bite amuse bouche
let star nectar drizzle down
the chin of insatiability
mop the furrowed brow
of a crimson lipped sun
whisper sweet innuendos
to a lovelorn venus
twist the ear
of an asteriod punk
roam contentedly disconnected
til the swollen river tugs
pirouette earthward tousled
yet impeccably done
~
the eel wife
the eel wife dreams
of oceans and islands
of gods and goldeneyes
of frantic kisses
of an unending slew of lovers
and the taste of fresh coconut
Rene ~ June 2011
One of my friends is going back to school to finish her degree in English, and she has a poetry class this fall. She doesn't read much poetry, so I recommended she check out Keats, Byron, Shakespeare, Whitman, Frost, and YOU. I desperately mean it. She should read you most.
ReplyDeleteBy "check out" I mean memorize. That's for you, Heather, if you're here.
ReplyDeletethis pretty well rocks my face off rene...which is fairly gross...this was exquisite...a two bite amuse bouche, for sure...
ReplyDeleteSuch a rush of words and colours here, Rene. You DO rock, girl. Old Fred's got the right idea, too....!!
ReplyDeleteOh wow this is absolutely amazing! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteFantastic Renee...love this eel wife...she is beautiful and gloriously alive here....bkm
ReplyDeleteOh, I want me some of that star nectar ... I'm going to let it drizzle down my chin, my chest, my tummy too! Your poetry is magic.
ReplyDeletesuper imaginative leaps and diction in this poem-- i like especially:
ReplyDeletelet star nectar drizzle down
the chin of insatiability
Food and feeling. Taste. Touch. Memory. I read this and could not get the image of moonlit beaches aswarm with shoals of fish.
ReplyDeleteThere is hunger here, of more than just the desire for food.
(P.S.: I won't take it personally, but my word veri for this was 'prick'. Hmm.)
I am no poet just like to put my feelings down, but I could take lessons from you myself. Great job.
ReplyDeleteQMM
Oh fer crying out loud Skippy :)
ReplyDeleteThank you all for such kind words and praise that I'm not sure I'm worthy of...you have all made my entire day.
ReplyDeletelovely surreal images and passion. Drifting between meaning and fancy. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteWoven like a beautiful handicraft. So loved every word. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteGosh, I love "star nectar"!
ReplyDeleteloved the asteroid punk
ReplyDeletecoconut.
ReplyDeletei miss the beach.
Beautiful words - bravo.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
glide through the eye
ReplyDeleteof a ruby kaleidoscope
Yes, please! ♥
"contentedly disconnected"
ReplyDeleteand
"tousled"
kudos for being the one who teaches words to dance!
The eel wife is a lot more romantic than most fishwives I've known.
ReplyDeletesmiles...i remember this one...happy OLN
ReplyDeletesucculent!
ReplyDeleteWonderful write. Perfect command of the language.
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Wonderful write!
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