on every wing
a blessing
and a home
in the purity of the air
for every savage,
hungry wolf
forgiveness and a feast
fit for a lost soul
returned home
and to every brother
perfect and imperfect
a simple song of gratitude
for providing the means
in which to walk
the way of truth
Rene ~ May 2011
for Magpie Tales
Rene, The first and last line both uplift. This piece is a gift.
ReplyDeleteamen.
ReplyDeletenow which verses of the hymn should we sing today...smiles.
A trifecta of bright images, my favorite is the first, carrying the heart into the flight.
ReplyDeleteThis was lovely, I enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Very touching, moving and inspiring. Such a smooth, real presentation. LIKED it!
ReplyDeletea religious poem which I can accept as poetic.
ReplyDeleteI like this very much.
I've joined your band of followers. it's that damned 'a few words about yourself' that's done it.
ReplyDeletePathetic, I know.
Oh yes! St Francis and I walk hand in hand. I appreciate your wise reference to his beatitude.
ReplyDeleteRene,
ReplyDeleteSimply Francis is simply lovely.
The way of truth is paved with stones and briars. They need love and compassion, too.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Rene.
ReplyDeleteI love that simple song of gratitude.
ReplyDeleteloved the whole thing- perfect for the prompt
ReplyDeleteyou betcha, Fred Miller
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ReplyDeleteReads like a prayer - just lovely Renee.
ReplyDeleteDreaming Assisi,
ReplyDeleteGratitude in every song
She has written truth
sweet and yummy words.
ReplyDeletelovely magpie.
Aww, Rene. :-) Such graceful -- and gracious -- peace in your words.
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Really enjoyed this piece. This reveals such a good attitude, in a fresh style.
ReplyDeleteHeartwarming. Delightful little lift.
ReplyDeleteA perfect poem for St. Francis. Well done, Renee. And thank you for stopping by too. Always a a pleasure. As it is, I left you a comment there. Do check it out when you have time. :)
ReplyDeleteSimple beautiful.
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Just perfect.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Giving blessings can't be bad...
ReplyDeleteWow! That was EXCELLENT!
ReplyDeleteGreat-flow work.
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