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y'hear that?

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what you are about 
to hear
is the bubble wrap 
snap of 
sapphire encrusted 
shamrocks
surrounding ruby 
slipper shod
sacred hearts as they 
twirl like 
dizzy dervishes
until spinning 
themselves
into fine silken strands
that taste a lot like
grape kool-aid
and sizzle 
on the tongue
like pop rocks

tune it on in
what you are about
to receive is a 
full piece
of peter max whirled 
harmony
treat your head
close your eyes 
let your ears glide
over the scope of
the collision

Rene Foran ~ April 2011


Comments

  1. i totally want some pop rocks and kool aid now...fun verse rene

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  2. oh snap! Bubble wrap snap, that is.
    Brought me back to many things from childhood. Love it!

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  3. I love that bubble wrap snap of sapphire encrusted shamrocks....nice writing..bkm

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  4. Trippy, Rene, like the insane pic. You've sizzled it up nicely.

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  5. Oh, I like this one very much.

    Thanks for stopping by my blog. Added myself to follow you.

    Lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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  6. Love this!! Makes me smile. : )

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  7. Who's trippin' down the streets of the city--smilin' at everybody she sees...everyone knows it's RENE!

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  8. Gosh, a noisy popping Magpie! LOL

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  9. Sapphire-encrusted shamrocks?
    Kool-aid?
    Pop rocks?

    My dear, what are you channeling? Joy! :)

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  10. Fabulous piece... can I have some pop rocks with my grape kool-aid? Please.

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  11. sugar-hit high! effervescent writing!

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  12. Bring back the 70's - psychedelia baby!

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  13. A fantastic trip...yes, quite psychedelic!

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  14. Great imagery and enjoyable read.

    Anita.

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  15. Very good Magpie. A treat for the ears and mind!

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  16. bubble wrap? It's like GOLD.

    GOLD I tell you.

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  17. Fun read with toe-tapping rhythm- Pass me some grape Kool-Aid!

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  18. This might be my favorite song and dance! :) Wonderful, wonderful.

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  19. Wonderful. I'm off for some chocolate popping candy now, you temptress, you!!

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