The Fifty Cent Tour

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

snow angels


frozen in time
the top of your world
a frosted cake
now close your eyes
make a wish
one
two
three
was it all
that you hoped it would be?
did you get to skate,
my ladies three?

Rene ~ January 2011

20 comments:

  1. yes
    we skated.


    we were, however, a bit tipsy.

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  2. LOL! I love your take on the photo this week. It fits like a glove...or should I say mitten?

    Blessings,
    Marion

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  3. This is just whimsical and bubbly. I loved it.

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  4. They DO look like sk8er ladies, don't they? The long skirts might not have been very practical, but they look mahvelous!

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  5. Clever and fitting! I'm not sure if I'll do this Magpie, but I enjoyed yours a lot. :)

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  6. a fun writing, filled with thought...i wonder if they were too tired to skate after layering all those clothes on...bkm

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  7. I love the fast pace of this, I like your snow angels.

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  8. Love the light airy feel, yet aging of the picture in your words, candles reminders of times long ago, yet skating on the icing of a cake, whimsical almost. Well done.

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  9. frozen in time
    the top of your world
    a frosted cake

    And they look a stiff as the little figures made to decortae cakes...

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  10. We need to skate. If not dance, then skate!

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  11. wow, let's make a figure 8...

    love your take,
    your words rock.

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  12. They look like they just read the poem and are digging it. I'm sure they baked and frosted many a cake in their time. Enjoyed your take.

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  13. They do look like little dolls on a white frosted cake. Speaking of which I could use a piece with a hot cup of tea!

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  14. Who mentioned CAKE? Must be time for tea! LOL

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  15. That's lovely. Love the title!

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  16. A lovely witty interpretation.

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  17. Greetings, Happy Sunday! Blessings…

    Friendship Awards, Enjoy!
    Thanks for the support, You Rock!
    xxx

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  18. thank you all for coming by, reading and commenting on my stuff. I truly appreciate it all. Really :)

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