Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
Rene, haiku is my favorite poetry form .. yours is just magical.
ReplyDeletelovely way to start the New Year, with White Linen, Pearl and a new look....blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteI really like the new look of your blog!
ReplyDeletenew life stirring...i like that...nice haiku
ReplyDeleteThis is very beautiful.. shows..
ReplyDeleteI like your anthropomorphic description of the trees. Nice haiku.
ReplyDeleteUnlike my friend Helen, I hate haiku. But I like this one, particularly the middle line.
ReplyDeleteexcellent words for the photo :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the reminder. It was well-timed!
ReplyDeleteI don't wanna overstay my welcome, but this is a wondeful haiku.
ReplyDeleteI think it makes me sad. I don't now why. It's really a poem of hope, isn't it?
Take care.
..dark hands clutch soft white linen..beautiful - and the pic..breath-taking..
ReplyDeleteNew hope. Great way to start the year.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Casey
Perfectly executed and beautiful haiku, Rene. One of my favorite forms.
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