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| Magpie Tales 43 |
it's a snow day
dance in your pajamas
put the suit away
i'll make ya pancakes, hottie
you can pour the tea
we'll use the china
grandma left to me
let's listen to Marvin, sweetheart
follow his advice
let's clear the table, honey
let's do it twice
three cheers for our snow day, darlin'
let's not waste a flake
tomorrow's a melting promise
not likely to break
Rene ~ December 2010
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dancing in pajamas, eating pancakes..then listening to marvin...mmm...
ReplyDeletethis is just brilliance!
ReplyDeleteand says much about
the Author.
C~
Who culd refuse such a charming invitation?
ReplyDeleteYour family are so lucky to have you. I hope you are a teacher or something, too. You are irresistible. Sorry. I know that's embarrassing, but it's how I feel when I see you come up in my Reader.
ReplyDeleteOh Rene! So naughty and delicious! Bring on those snow days! Marvin knew how to sing it ..........
ReplyDeleteSnow days are the best, especially if you have someone to play with. Enjoyed the sense of both playfulness and wisdom--(what's smarter than flat out enjoying a gift you didn't know was coming?) Liked it a lot.
ReplyDeleteZowie. Love it.
ReplyDelete"let's listen to Marvin
ReplyDeletefollow his advice
let's clear the table, honey
let's do it twice"
I just got a craving for pancakes!
I just love reading your words, Rene!
ReplyDeleteYou made me smile :)
ReplyDeleteForget eh pancakes! LOL. Love your words here. so sweet and dreamy an image of a couple in love...adn cozied up, snowed in. Snow can indeed be a gift, eh? :)
ReplyDelete*LOVE*
ReplyDeleteSomehow I am humming
"If you reach for the stars
All you get are the stars
But we've found a whole new spin
If you reach for the heavens
You get the stars thrown in"
:-)
This sings with fun and love! What a song it could be!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat advice for winter weather. Great write.
ReplyDeleteAwesome invitation!
ReplyDeleteI'm going for it too ;)
cheers
Excellent. I really enjoyed it :)
ReplyDeleteBaby, it's cold outside. I love the voice in this.
ReplyDeleteIs that picture a real one? I mean, if course it's real. Are you in snow right now?
Cheers,
Casey
Lovely bonus day off.
ReplyDeleteNice Magpie
very sexy, and oh so cozy....enjoy...blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteWowiiezz.. I felt like dancing to this one! And those last 2 lines - AWESOME!!!
ReplyDelete"melting promise" -- I have no words to describe how much I liked this!!!
Love this, jazzy, comforting and cheeky, with a great rhythm too!
ReplyDeleteLove this Rene.
ReplyDeleteThis is a adorable "clear the table" too cute and I loved the expression "lets not waste a flake" All grown ups should have their own snow day!
ReplyDeleteNow that's the way to enjoy the snow!
ReplyDeleteLoved this - very charming.
YES! This is how I like to spend my snow days! Now if only we would have some.
ReplyDeleteWoman that is my kind of snow day. Deliciously erotic
ReplyDeletebrilliant hot cha cha poem! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteRene!!!!!! One of your finest. And that is saying something, woman.
ReplyDeleteFabulous Rene!! A perfectly perfect snow day.
ReplyDeleteLove it! Now I am wishing for snow.
ReplyDeleteI see you know how to make the most of the moment!
ReplyDeleteoooh, I love it. A perfect day!
ReplyDeleteIf I can have a day like you described, Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow.
ReplyDeleteHow 'bout you make the pancakes and I'll pour the coffee? ;)
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to say thank you all for stopping by! I am sorry I couldn't send responses back to you all...but I'm thigh deep in alligators :)
ReplyDeleteAgain, thank you all!
and Listen to Marvin
Peace ~ Rene
Woohooo!!! More snow days please!!
ReplyDeleteAh, snow days and dancing in jammies. Perfection. Don't forget the woolly socks! (I woke up to snow cover this morning!)
ReplyDeleteWho could not find his/her heart melting with such a warm invitation!
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