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| Magpie 44 |
broad shoulders
set
leaning up against
the barn, come hither
i heard you cry
set
leaning up against
the barn, come hither
i heard you cry
save me, baby
frozen in motion
honey colored
honey colored
rugged
thrill ride
thrill ride
screaming eagle inked
i know we'd fit
ride me, baby
i saw us fly
i know we'd fit
ride me, baby
i saw us fly
emancipated
we hit the sky
we hit the sky
thrusting wings forward
no speed limit
no speed limit
take me, baby
let freedom glide
Rene ~ 2010
Ha! Love those hills and valleys.
ReplyDeletesometimes, you have to close your eyes and let the force take you down the hill.
ReplyDeletewell...i guess its all in how you read this..ahem...smiles.
ReplyDeleteVery cleverly written... a special moment.
ReplyDeleteFlexible is a good thing! This is a delicious poem...
ReplyDelete*whispering 'cause I don't want to break the spell...* I like what Vodka Mom said about this....
ReplyDeleteWheeeeee! "Rosebud..." :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Vodka Mom, that was just the tweak I needed :)
ReplyDeleteI have this identical sled propped up in my garage. I cannot part with it even though my kids would never consider using that old thing. Thanks for the memory jolt.
ReplyDeleteI love this Rene! got me all hot in the snow...:)
ReplyDeleteWhee and whee and even more whee !!
ReplyDeleteSensual sledding.
ReplyDelete:-) We're getting a foot of snow tonight...
Pearl
p.s. Thanks for the blogroll mention! :-)
Zowie!
ReplyDeleteI just moved you way up the list in my Google Reader. Can't believe I missed three of your posts. I just wasn't scrolling down far enough. Won't happen again.
ReplyDeleteI now have a totally new perspective on sledding. Another winner, and one of my very favorite magpies.
ReplyDeleteWow....what a ride!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteMmmm. Hold on while I throw some ice down my er shirt!
ReplyDeleteVery creative use of the prompt- loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great downhill rush of a poem. Fine stuff.
ReplyDeleteWhat terrific synergy of energy. Hot & sexy for a cool ride!
ReplyDeleteNice surprise!
(Glad you found the Tent.)
I am rather thinking all the snow melted there, dear Rene! :) Love the flight and the afterglow too of the soft snow.
ReplyDeleteLove the double entendre... what a ride!
ReplyDeleteNice blog... I look forward to visiting you again.
~Laurie
i love how this can have a G or an X rating.
ReplyDeleteWhoa baby!! Sizzlin'
ReplyDeleteRacy, indeed!
ReplyDeleteOh, I'm sure i left a comment here before. Maybe it was too racy itself? Can;t recall. Anyway, another fine poem from your, Rene. you are so creative with words.
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