Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
short, sweet, powerful
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ReplyDeletei used to get in so much trouble after services in the parking lot...
In the winter, i like to think that when I don't wear a coat my body is burning calories. Our school secretary and I tease each other that "if anyone wants me, I'll be out in the parking lot-losing weight."
ReplyDeletetossin' a penny - my shiniest! - in the hat.
ReplyDeletei like how you
whisper a lesson,
and how it hits squarely.
yea, Rene!
C~
Love this Rene! So well said (tho' you always manage to bring a laugh within your seriousness ... "and not your pants"). Thank you for sharing your talent and your wisdom. Love, Ginny
ReplyDeleteNeeded to read this one today. :-) xo
ReplyDeleteWell said and I like the humorous twist!
ReplyDeleteI'm so curious what sparked this poem....
ReplyDeleteDitto! It's important to pracice what you preach (or heard preached) because all too many folks go to church and as soon as they're out the door, the gossip starts!
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend, Renee :-)
Doris
Mi pantalones en fuego! And so is my tongue! Aieee!
ReplyDeleteMy word veri is "picapoe". Heehee.
i love the final line especially..."here, in the parking lot." That packs a lot of punch, Rene...You carry me along with beautiful reflections, and then hit home...powerful! ~Janine XO
ReplyDeleteParishioners, start your engines!
ReplyDeletePearl
Whoa. LOVE THIS!!
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