Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
And that daisy was correct, although I can't say I always liked the answer I got...
ReplyDelete*clink*
ReplyDeletelove it
i tried to write something witty and rhyme-ish in response
nothing doing
That makes me happy! I always regretted plucking all the petals off.
ReplyDeleteha. love it.
ReplyDeleteyeah how would you like someone pulling you rhair out?
Awwww! How great a Valentine's Day card would this be?!
ReplyDeletePearl
Well done. Very clever and cute.
ReplyDeleteMiss,
ReplyDeleteI apologize for the intrusion. It's always uncomfortable when commenting as the 'New Guy.' I'll be brief. Your poetry is truly alluring for me. Not so much your grammar or syntax or even the content...it's as though you are struggling deep inside. Perhaps a struggle between the spiritual and carnal. You have an attachment to the dissonance assaulting your senses, and you internalize it, which is captivating; maybe I recognize this as I too struggle with my own demons. There is comfort in knowing I'm not alone. Sorry for taking so much of your time.
Kindest Wishes
Thanks everyone for the comments...
ReplyDeleteand Dean
everyone likes watching
a good old fashioned trainweck
especially the lady
who crawls out from under it
smoothing her hair
Peace ~ Rene
very cute ;-)
ReplyDeleteI always felt sad when I was left holding one lone petal.
ReplyDeleteThe daisy is the bane of young girl lovers who find themselves with one last petal and it is not the "He loves me" one. It's been forever since I've done that plucking thing. Thanks for the memory, and the plucky perspective of the daisy that wants to keep its head.
ReplyDeleteOh gosh, love this line:
ReplyDelete"petals beyond petals"
The ending is so darling.