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Saturday, March 27, 2010

saturdilemma

sky blue
saturday song
got me
humming
that tune
for the whole day
long
trying to find the
words
to describe
this delicious~ness
only trouble
is that
they ain't been
invented yet
can i draw
a picture
for you?
oh no
that shade of blue
would never, ever do
maybe if i make you
a dish of
something nice?
hmm but
i just can't find
that
missing
 je ne sais spice..
i could make you
a sweater
and wrap you
in it's charms
but here's
 the problem
it would have
orangutan arms
so i think
 i'll stick
with the thing
i know the best
and that's keeping it
simple
and i'll let nature
do the rest
sky blue
saturday song
got me humming that tune
the whole day long...

Peace ~ Rene

16 comments:

  1. that is just how it was here, today, too :=)

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  2. Oh, yes, I agree...it was sky blue sky here today.

    Lovely!

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  3. It's beautiful here as well. Aren't these days the best kinds?

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  4. That's my new favorite Saturday song.
    Hey Rene, long time. Hope you are well

    IB

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  5. i really, really loved that........

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  6. Very fun and appropritate for my town too ;-)

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  7. its been up and down here, but today IS WONERFUL. Sorry i havent beento your log for awhile Rene, but im glad i had time to stop by. :D

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  8. Your Saturday sounds like my Sunday. A fun song, Rene.

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  9. I swear you can sing to your poems, Rene.

    Pearl

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  10. Pearl:

    I sing my poems and tunes...
    How about youuuuuuu?

    Question to all...

    Do you read your stuff aloud before you post it?

    Peace ~ Rene

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  11. Oh that is funny what Pearl wrote above as I was thinking the exact same thing--you really could make these into songs. this one is so sweet. What a heart you have.

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  12. Fantastic!!! Put this one to music...and we'll all hum it with you!! This is one terrific set of lyrics! Love it! ~Janine XO

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  13. Especially orangutan arms...oh Rene.

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  14. I LOVE LOVE this one in particular. Love the orangutan arms. OK, Rene, I want to interview you for a Friday Feature on my blog. See the one being kicked off this Friday on my blog and let me know if I can do likewise with you to get others to read your amazing poetry. In fact, I really think you coudl sell your work. Its is so sweet and thoughtful and ...well delicious!

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