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Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Foggy Brain Cloud Breakdown

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A little brain clearing fun:

Sittin’
Doin’
 Nuthin’
When I should be
Writin’
 sumthin’
About
 Junk
And
 stuff
And blowy
Poetry
Fluff
Should be
 Writin’
What I’m
 knowin’
But none of them
Words is
 Flowin’
So I hit
Up the
 Facebook
Thought I'd
Give it a good look
Folks on Farmville
Doing chores
Or caught up in
Mafia Wars
Not me
I don’t play
I can barely manage
My own
 Day
So I get
Back to
 Writin’
But going
Outside’s
More excitin’
Oh Lord
Help me
I got’s the
Writin’
ADD
My lack of
Focus
Is astounding
The keyboard
 I should
 Be pounding
I give myself
A little scare
Maybe
 It’s
Just not there
"What if
It’s gone?
And
 I’m done?"
Finished
Before
I begun?
That talk is
 Crazy
I need to
Quit
Relax
Chill out
Just a bit
Cut the crap
And just write
Or I’m
Gonna be
Up
All night...



Peace Out Suckas~Rene 2010

22 comments:

  1. Reminds me of a Shel Silverstein.

    Funny. And I can relate.

    CR

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  2. hahaha. hopefully that fun little exercise got you going...smiles.

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  3. That put a smile on my face! Hope it got you on your writing feet.

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  4. haha
    thats really good
    im serious
    you should start your own rap label
    just throw some gratuitous f-bombs in there
    and something about hos

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  5. justsomethoughts...the semi-automatic re-mix is the one with the f-bombs and the wicky-wicks...

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  6. With a foot plus of snow out the window tonight, I'm appreciating your spring countdown.

    The brain fog is ok. It happens. I like what you did with it. :-)

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  7. I love this fun little ditty.

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  8. I think your brain is ready for Spring, Yes?

    This was a treat, Rene!

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  9. i think it happens to all of us. but it's the beauty of blogging. you don't HAVE to do anything, it's always exactly what you want it to be.

    :-)
    /j

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  10. Even with nuthin' to write about, you say it so darn well, RENE!

    Love the Facebook and the Farmville/Mafia War mention :)

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  11. love
    that
    so
    much

    almost
    as
    much
    as
    i
    love
    you

    xxx

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  12. Well that just put a smile on my face. Thanks, pal!

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  13. Nice. I've been feeling that for the last couple of days.

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  14. instead
    i guess
    ill mess around
    wit dis here
    template
    agin.

    xoxo Rene and I had afeeling your 8year old would get along with mine.

    xo

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  15. I wish my writers block was so creative.

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  16. YOU...

    You ROCK.

    Would that the world could have naught to say, and be so eloquent about it. But, then, they wouldn't bite so hard, and you'd be average.

    Thank the gods-- and goddess[es]-- they don't. You aren't.

    Slainte, Lady Rene...

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  17. Rene, you are seriously one creative lovely woman? how do you do it? I am amazed at just how good and fun your poems are. Love this one too. I can so see it in a book.

    In particular, i loved this bit:

    "And blowy
    Poetry
    Fluff"

    nice masthead inntro with link too, btw.

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  18. I love it...!!! It has a Carl Sandburg feeling to it.

    You're very talented. :-)

    Cheers,

    Jo

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  19. That was pretty darn good for a girl with writing ADD.
    :-)
    xo

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  20. This is why we love you, Rene -- even your concerns about creativity lead you to write about it, you come up with a witty stream of pure joy.

    The muse is never leaving you, Rene. It's found far too welcoming a home.

    Pearl

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