peach colored night
sailor’s delight
my gypsy soul
wrestles for control
over my
common sense
gonna hop the fence
and hit the road
less traveled
let my life unravel
and all the knots
untangle
nobody askin'
where i'm going
or
where i've been
don't need
no certification
to take a load off,
my friend
fed curiosity
to the cat
left my baggage
at the flat
come hit
the road less traveled
let your life unravel
and the knots untangle
follow the
carrot
i
dangle
down
the
road
less traveled
Rene ~2009
Revised June 25, 2011
Love this, Rene!
ReplyDeletePlease!
Pretty Please!
You have to seek out ways to publish your work!!!
Hey, I know a great guy over
at Pensive Pony Media! ;)
I'm with Lynn, Rene!
ReplyDeleteThis is not only beautifully written, but clever, too.
I hope to see these words in print soon!
Enjoy the beautiful weather!
Rene,
ReplyDeleteyou are on fire with that pen of yours!
seriously... beautiful AND fun!
C
Great one! I love the road less traveled because the others you do find along the way are so damn interesting!
ReplyDeletePerfect. I especially liked the allusion to the road less travelled - I'm a big fan of Robert Frost (I'm pretty sure he was a distant relative of mine.... :) )
ReplyDeleteThis should be sung around a campfire. :-)
ReplyDeletePearl
mmmmmmmm carrots!
ReplyDeleteNot your in-law says:
ReplyDeleteYou look very lovely today. Period.
powdergirl...
ReplyDeleteyou crack me up..heh
Rene
Well, Rene, I feel so redundant here after such exquisite prose but truly, brilliant poem again. I adore it.
ReplyDeleteLove this line in particular:
"Feed your curiosity
to the cat..." BRilliant.
wonderfully done...excellent!
ReplyDeletenice :)
ReplyDeletePerfect! I love the way that your poems roll! Like song!
ReplyDeleteno, really...
ReplyDeleteWorld Class!
Hmm. Pretty good.
ReplyDeleteMy english isn't enough good but the picture is great...
ReplyDeleteRegards from France,
Pierre