in the dirt
and told her
if she were
blind
blind
rubbing the mud
in her eyes
in her eyes
would
make
her
see
make
her
see
how can that be?
she laughed.
my grandma told me,
he assured, confidently
she read it to me
from her
big brown storybook
big brown storybook
the one she uses
with her
magic beads
with her
magic beads
what makes it work?
she asked him
the spit
or
the dirt?
or
the dirt?
i think
you need them both
together
you need them both
together
he said
do you think
it's true
like it will really
it's true
like it will really
for sure work?
she asked
eyes wide
searching
eyes wide
searching
i don't know for certain,
he said
but
he said
but
sometimes
you just gotta
tell yourself
you just gotta
tell yourself
it will
cuz that's when it
does...
y'know, believin',
he said, whispering
does...
y'know, believin',
he said, whispering
i wonder if
it can work
it can work
on sadness,
she asked
she asked
because
i have some
i have some
in my heart
that i would like
to go
away
to go
away
...
let's try it
let's try it
and
tell ourselves
that it
will work,
he said
no
tell ourselves
that it
will work,
he said
no
she said
let's both
believe
that it will...
that it will...
peace - rene 2009
Wow.
ReplyDeleteThat's one of the best things I've read in a very long time.
Thankyou.
Nicely done. great message, great control.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of the big brown storybook and the magic beads.
Thank you, Rene
ReplyDeleteYou gave me images of Harper Lee.
ReplyDeleteSo quiet, so understated, and so capable of bringing tears to my eyes. You've really got a way of writing that more people should know about.
ReplyDeletePearl
Great ending....or should I say, "beginning?"
ReplyDeleteAwww.
ReplyDeleteWhat Pearl said.
Once again.
beautiful.
ReplyDeletei could see it.
the dirt the spit and all.
like the new pic by the way.
liked to old one too.
excellence...
ReplyDeletethe notion (which i believe in)
and your writing!
peace~
I love this! Well written. Can I read it to my 4th grade Sunday School class?
ReplyDeleteThat is exceptional writing Rene.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
xo
Well done, Rene. And I love the new photo :)
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful, Rene.
ReplyDeleteLove it.
(How do you do it?)
aaawww...! I love this--so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing, Rene
ReplyDeletewell done
ReplyDeletei love this.
ReplyDeleteseriously.
and that bunny is ADORABLE.
You are brilliant! The imagery in this is crisp, concise and profound!!! I'm in awe! ~Janine XO
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone
ReplyDeletethis was inspired by a conversation between two kids in my class about the power of believing in something...I truly love being a "fly on the wall" during these times...the purest kind of faith. :)
Once again, Thank you
And that picture is of Mary, on a farm in Westboro, MA. One of the local children invited Mary over to play with her rabbits.
Peace~Rene