Neptune had a daughter
her name was Marie
she loved a boy named, Aidan born of fire was he
He danced
along the shore
as she sang
songs
from the sea
Jump in Aidan
come dance with me
I'm just a lonely girl
in the great big sea
Dive into to my arms
sail away with me
Jump in Aidan
come dance with me
Now Aidan really longed
to into her dive
but one dance with Marie
he'd never survive
so tragically the offer
he had to decline
but his passion for her
he had to decline
but his passion for her
would never subside
Jump in Aidan
come dance with me
I'm just a lonely girl
in the great big sea
Dive into to my arms
sail away with me
Jump in Aidan
come dance with me
Come dance with me,Aidan
every night
she does call
swim into me,lover
Cry her waves
as they fall
though theirs is a love
that will never be
It is
as endless as
Eternity
Peace - Rene 2009
Oh Rene. I like this one.
ReplyDeleteI knew a girl like that; forever tempting me. You gotta watch out for some chicks. They can be trouble.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Rene. I really like this one :D
ReplyDeleteSmiles~Felinae~
you wrote this
ReplyDeleteby at a bonfire
with guitar in hand
didn't you.
and you probably
let your fingers find the chords
and your words simply fell together the very first time you sang this, penned this.
poems, pictures, songs, stories...
Rrrrrr-Rene Keychain!
(inside joke. twss.)
Chuck - It just doesn't haven't have the same ( key) ring to it...
ReplyDeleteLike Chaka Khan- Chuck Keychain..
Thanks for your comments everyone! But so far, at this writing, my technorati test pattern has received more! :)
Peace - Rene
My boy has that name. For the fiery red hair he had as a newborn.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
We're gonna need an acoustic guitar, a six-pack, and a bonfire, Rene.
ReplyDeleteI so admire your way with words. Would love to hear you recite this...
Pearl
It makes me think of Poe's "Annabelle Lee," and, for some reason, of Dorothy Parker's "The Dark Girl's Rhyme."
ReplyDeleteGood one!
What a fun poem--just the sort of tone I needed this evening.
ReplyDeleteI love to swim...
ReplyDeleteI was told once I'd need a life jacket.
Just made me desire to build my own vessel and hostage a Raven-haired Celtic Goddess and fulfill both our dreams by sailing her to Eirrean...
Cygnus
That was perfect. Thank you.
ReplyDeletexo
Great poem!
ReplyDeleteI like this. It sounds like a song my mother would know--but I like that sing song quality about it.
ReplyDeleteThis is divine piece.
ReplyDeletelove the delightful spirits...
keep dancing...
keep smiling!
I like this. All it needs is music.
ReplyDeleteThis one is worthy of a song :) Thanks for linking with Potluck xx
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ReplyDeletehelp visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
Thanks!
hope to see you in tomorrow night,
write a poem related to 7 sins, post it ahead of the time.
linking in as soon as we are open, that would do much magic to your work's view.
take good care.
Cheers!