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| "hands" Image via Magpie Tales |
thumpa da
thump
i catch myself
caught up
in our spinning
rhythm go round
merrily galloping, we
bright, sweet, lovely
you then me
you then me
조금
jogeum
조금
jogeum
경주
gyeongju
경주
gyeongju
together
we lace
restless
thoroughbred
thundering
pulses
one
strong
infinite
loop
Rene ~ January 20, 2013
For Magpie Tales 152
and D'verse Poets Poetics: Foreign tongue
my foreign words are:
조금 jogeum, the Korean word for chasing
경주 gyeongju, the Korean word for racing
smiles....makes me think of kids running free through a field...holding hands...maybe kinda like the opening of little house...you know...smiles. nice us of sound, and i like the single thread...
ReplyDeleteThe image made me think of how, when I hold someones hand, I try to find their pulse. :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem, Rene. I picture two young children holding hands and running side by side. What a happy poem this is!
ReplyDeleteThis poem suits the photo of children clasping hands so wonderfully. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThis was perfect, it makes me want to do the happy dance!
ReplyDeleteoh i like the carefree feel in this..and the japanese adds just the right dash of magic
ReplyDeleteLovely and happy!
ReplyDeletenice, love the characters in here, really adds a new dimension and artistic sense to the poetry. Wonderfully done. Thanks for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteFabulous Rene. Happy poetry and poetry with Korean in it too!
ReplyDeleteHappy bouncing write - lovely.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Such happy imagery...it puts me in mind of children's faces at the carnival, circus or parade. Thump da Thump!
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SueAnn
I could almost feel the wind in my face as I ran along with them.
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Go for the brass ring! Charming write, Rene...
ReplyDeleteA true connection indeed...love this Rene! :-)
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