tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post9138492396447801888..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: red roofsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-7928663951967594082012-05-06T21:19:06.100-04:002012-05-06T21:19:06.100-04:00You just reminded me why I blog. You are priceless...You just reminded me why I blog. You are priceless. There are not enough pennies to go in that hat to reciprocate with your artfully formed words and irreplaceable spirit....♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-14678414491105967492012-05-04T17:19:26.321-04:002012-05-04T17:19:26.321-04:00Not sure if my last attempt at a comment went thro...Not sure if my last attempt at a comment went through, but basically I said that was beautiful.Neilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05191467009055093356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-12225224972200579782012-04-30T21:52:21.830-04:002012-04-30T21:52:21.830-04:00Oh Rene.
words cannot express....
(((luv))...Oh Rene. <br /><br /><br />words cannot express....<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />(((luv)))Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-16382410709217621922012-04-30T16:48:29.133-04:002012-04-30T16:48:29.133-04:00Love this, Rene.
PearlLove this, Rene.<br /><br />PearlPearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05261369905176088917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-78014481119976198372012-04-28T22:13:05.177-04:002012-04-28T22:13:05.177-04:00Oh, this is lovely.
I loved it!
XOXO
A.Oh, this is lovely.<br /><br />I loved it!<br /><br />XOXO<br /><br />A.Anna Leflerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06968276973881720329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-78393826963706258912012-04-18T15:18:41.356-04:002012-04-18T15:18:41.356-04:00Nails and prophecy - what a fantastic double act....Nails and prophecy - what a fantastic double act. Beautiful contrasts here.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-90620360283287306892012-04-18T06:35:52.732-04:002012-04-18T06:35:52.732-04:00There is a lot going on in that noggin of yours. I...There is a lot going on in that noggin of yours. I'm glad you share it with us :)Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-48337677269765523472012-04-18T05:54:36.330-04:002012-04-18T05:54:36.330-04:00Lovely rhythm, lovely write.
Anna :o]Lovely rhythm, lovely write.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-52913275142361852232012-04-17T14:44:40.866-04:002012-04-17T14:44:40.866-04:00An amazing write Rene!!!! I love this poem....a ne...An amazing write Rene!!!! I love this poem....a new fav for me of yours!! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-17374900362615959562012-04-17T11:37:19.986-04:002012-04-17T11:37:19.986-04:00where kisses
soothe like wine
or sting like fire a...where kisses<br />soothe like wine<br />or sting like fire ants<br /><br />(!) wowTess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8010262985689333122012-04-17T06:15:02.380-04:002012-04-17T06:15:02.380-04:00Intentionally rhythmic, and works very well.Intentionally rhythmic, and works very well.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-23219784616472598692012-04-17T01:35:38.305-04:002012-04-17T01:35:38.305-04:00Where kisses soothe or sting.. Man! Ive been ther...Where kisses soothe or sting.. Man! Ive been there. <br /><br />Great work here. Loved it!Crystal Pistolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16384208762919600611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-78244040438289222242012-04-16T21:07:59.570-04:002012-04-16T21:07:59.570-04:00The repeated stanza is highly effective. Glad you ...The repeated stanza is highly effective. Glad you used it only twice. Conservative with words and inference, you accent components of the painting rather than describing them. The subtlety creates power.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-32469578336130402042012-04-16T20:02:40.034-04:002012-04-16T20:02:40.034-04:00I like the rhythm of this piece.
=)I like the rhythm of this piece.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-36417719314445515612012-04-16T17:52:12.353-04:002012-04-16T17:52:12.353-04:00So many quiet scenes here - they add up to more th...So many quiet scenes here - they add up to more than the sum of their parts.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-27684605536730344762012-04-16T16:08:42.268-04:002012-04-16T16:08:42.268-04:00Makes me wish I had a red roof, instead of a flat ...Makes me wish I had a red roof, instead of a flat one! LOLJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-40190189537015246992012-04-16T14:17:37.439-04:002012-04-16T14:17:37.439-04:00This has a lovely cadence, and I like the 'nai...This has a lovely cadence, and I like the 'nails and prophecy'Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-80010191899179920112012-04-16T12:22:45.650-04:002012-04-16T12:22:45.650-04:00You packed so much into that endless space ..You packed so much into that endless space ..Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-68743656332640417432012-04-16T11:03:38.245-04:002012-04-16T11:03:38.245-04:00The contrasting kisses are a really nice touch! I ...The contrasting kisses are a really nice touch! I like this very much.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-27727028488464703402012-04-15T21:59:53.364-04:002012-04-15T21:59:53.364-04:00nice...so much going on in the city and you bring ...nice...so much going on in the city and you bring out a few of her stories...the mom and son were emotive a bit for me...and the bridegroom, some nice touches here rene...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-46914771462727576812012-04-15T21:57:27.541-04:002012-04-15T21:57:27.541-04:00Oh, that endless space...this piece sings of yearn...Oh, that endless space...this piece sings of yearning in a haunting and heartfull way.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8781697170132735092012-04-15T21:48:50.726-04:002012-04-15T21:48:50.726-04:00the second and third stanza made me remember what ...the second and third stanza made me remember what it was like to be single, lost, ignored, and unloved.<br /><br /><br />the fifth and sixth stanza related to me on how my life staretd to make sense.<br /><br />Thsi was really in your face strong and tangible. I liked it a lot.Lancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02421199592104616785noreply@blogger.com