tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post8767139636265384573..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: criss crossAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-83039879658971401292012-10-08T07:50:48.258-04:002012-10-08T07:50:48.258-04:00What wonderful images here!! Wonderful stanzas. ...What wonderful images here!! Wonderful stanzas. Really like this one: <br /><br />a sack of groceries<br />an open mouth<br />a french baguette <br />a lusty tongue<br /><br />Really good writing!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-87711557806123261572012-10-07T22:51:11.210-04:002012-10-07T22:51:11.210-04:00I so enjoyed this...the stilettos, the eggs, the a...I so enjoyed this...the stilettos, the eggs, the alibi......great stuff!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56744941401970205782012-10-07T18:34:12.988-04:002012-10-07T18:34:12.988-04:00Love you, Marian...mean it :)Love you, Marian...mean it :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-77729080793162537642012-10-07T18:31:37.762-04:002012-10-07T18:31:37.762-04:00oh love this one, Rene. especially the phrases Bri...oh love this one, Rene. especially the phrases Brian picked out. yowza, very nice! c'mon over for some tea & anecdotes. anytime. Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-59218879061433775142012-10-05T12:03:01.132-04:002012-10-05T12:03:01.132-04:00"a sack of groceries
an open mouth
a french b..."a sack of groceries<br />an open mouth<br />a french baguette <br />a lusty tongue"<br /><br />Exciting and strangely erotic, great pacing and use of language. Those precious eggs too!Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8600303999277755472012-10-05T05:02:43.618-04:002012-10-05T05:02:43.618-04:00Kim, I've never read that series...but thanks:...Kim, I've never read that series...but thanks:)<br />This was actually inspired by a snagged pair of nylons. The snag was ladder like and reminded me of window blind shadows... The kind that are in film noir classics. Inspiración can come from anywhere!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25319551314465680302012-10-05T01:24:21.292-04:002012-10-05T01:24:21.292-04:00HA!
Having just finished reading the Shades of Gra...HA!<br />Having just finished reading the Shades of Gray Trilogy, I felt like I was reading a snippet, poetically designed. Rene... what have you been reading?! ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-83296939924838975062012-10-05T00:16:09.618-04:002012-10-05T00:16:09.618-04:00This has wicked flow and great attitude. It create...This has wicked flow and great attitude. It creates a world of its own, full of magic and mayhem. Very enjoyable, thanks.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-59819013237313543802012-10-04T22:35:37.075-04:002012-10-04T22:35:37.075-04:00ha rene...what an intriguing cacophony of images, ...ha rene...what an intriguing cacophony of images, that flow really well together actually my fav parts are...<br /><br />love will stay<br />for tea<br />and anecdotes<br /><br />fear demands<br />bourbon<br />and bondage<br /><br />i could easily see you up the stairs with the disingrating bag of groceries...and breakfast is good anytime...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com