tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post7606757802027359476..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: lighthouseAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-72644450429198002882011-05-16T03:31:59.723-04:002011-05-16T03:31:59.723-04:00I love hos it builds up to the last two lines...pe...I love hos it builds up to the last two lines...perfect, masterfully written!Alegria Imperialnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-70542766755409408472011-05-16T00:31:43.974-04:002011-05-16T00:31:43.974-04:00Inread it three times and enjoyed it more each tim...Inread it three times and enjoyed it more each time. There is a lot for me to learn from here.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-20372081085562552262011-05-15T21:52:18.903-04:002011-05-15T21:52:18.903-04:00Great response with your focus on the horizon. Suc...Great response with your focus on the horizon. Such an imaginative combination of the images/elements in the photo. I love it!Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-18954998843590947922011-05-15T21:24:16.323-04:002011-05-15T21:24:16.323-04:00This is a beautiful metaphor of love and marriage....This is a beautiful metaphor of love and marriage.Sharon Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00695395104518983907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-86247358992575348752011-05-15T20:13:19.743-04:002011-05-15T20:13:19.743-04:00Saw that I'd commented on this way back. Read ...Saw that I'd commented on this way back. Read it again as though it was the first time. Great match to the prompt.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/05/15/old-love/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-39227760800999196782011-05-15T19:32:14.492-04:002011-05-15T19:32:14.492-04:00Beautiful imagery being used here! I liked the flo...Beautiful imagery being used here! I liked the flow as wellRegCPA5963https://www.blogger.com/profile/02942519536643987787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-57694670942126706792011-05-15T18:06:30.920-04:002011-05-15T18:06:30.920-04:00Last line is perfect.Last line is perfect.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-26180726272942901782011-05-15T17:54:15.320-04:002011-05-15T17:54:15.320-04:00It's not only light houses that light up the ...It's not only light houses that light up the world...words can do it too!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-50718431033826305242011-05-15T17:43:41.759-04:002011-05-15T17:43:41.759-04:00What an imaginative and intimate prelude to slumbe...What an imaginative and intimate prelude to slumbers. So cool how you wrote this with such well crafted projections and conjecture.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-89173176250183754522011-05-15T17:07:37.528-04:002011-05-15T17:07:37.528-04:00Sensational take on marriage/relationship. Amazing...Sensational take on marriage/relationship. Amazing demonstration of taking an object (in this case, a flash of light across your partner's chest) and picking it up and running away with it in terms of likening it to something else- more difficult to do than I first imagined any time that I have tried. Your imagination is vast. Great prompt response.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56947627316133767922011-05-15T17:03:59.609-04:002011-05-15T17:03:59.609-04:00this feels so intimate and real.this feels so intimate and real.Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-55996323925820426472011-05-15T16:45:08.961-04:002011-05-15T16:45:08.961-04:00Hmm yeah, "objects in the bedroom may be furt...Hmm yeah, "objects in the bedroom may be further away than they appear"?Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-61076024146463200732010-09-22T01:54:29.714-04:002010-09-22T01:54:29.714-04:00This was THE perfect definition of "you know ...This was THE perfect definition of "you know what"! <br />Neatly put, Rene... <br />"a sliver of light under a bolted door,<br />a weakness underlined," -- totally loved these lines in particular... they held a LOT of meaning hidden in them... phheew! <br /><br />Thank you so much for linking this beautiful poem with poetry potluck, R... I hope you had/ar having a great time at the potluck! :)Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-53276801505745336492010-09-21T16:44:51.714-04:002010-09-21T16:44:51.714-04:00I don't think my first comment posted...I love...I don't think my first comment posted...I love the visuals in this poem and enjoyed your "About me..." confessions, too. Looking forward to reading more of your work.Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-81275989470272472342010-09-20T18:54:30.858-04:002010-09-20T18:54:30.858-04:00Dear Rene:
your poetry is super delicious,
love t...Dear Rene:<br /><br />your poetry is super delicious,<br />love the perspective here,<br />rich texture and beautiful sentiments,<br />they make your work real and magical at the same time.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8916320549494365122010-07-28T08:53:52.542-04:002010-07-28T08:53:52.542-04:00*plink*
incredible.
hopeless
hopeful
resigned...*plink*<br /><br />incredible. <br /><br />hopeless <br />hopeful <br />resigned<br />contemplative <br />promising <br /><br />all in how many words ?justsomethoughts...https://www.blogger.com/profile/05778254901832542234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-88770060482654948982010-07-27T20:30:27.787-04:002010-07-27T20:30:27.787-04:00Rene, this is another outstanding poem. You are tr...Rene, this is another outstanding poem. You are truly talented, and I'd like to place an advance order for your book now!! (Let me know as soon as you decide on the price ... I think I'll take 5 copies, actually.)Ginnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10639212842022641538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-67002963894042270852010-07-27T19:23:51.793-04:002010-07-27T19:23:51.793-04:00Swim parallel.
If that isn't the perfect meta...Swim parallel.<br /><br />If that isn't the perfect metaphor for marriage I don't know what is.<br /><br />Are you still breathing? Hope so. Swimming, swimming, ...Ann Imighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01383249597505013239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-39490673632052123462010-07-27T10:50:41.429-04:002010-07-27T10:50:41.429-04:00That is beautiful.
Appropriate for the full moon...That is beautiful. <br /><br />Appropriate for the full moon. xocheatymoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06328903955238115971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-91853311627551426952010-07-27T00:00:40.850-04:002010-07-27T00:00:40.850-04:00What a way with words.
Beautiful,
jjWhat a way with words.<br />Beautiful,<br />jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-68317135810010551522010-07-26T20:46:32.827-04:002010-07-26T20:46:32.827-04:00oh Rene I really LOVED that one.
You are an amaz...oh Rene I really LOVED that one. <br /><br />You are an amazing spirit.......Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-27368828754679139892010-07-26T10:58:12.262-04:002010-07-26T10:58:12.262-04:00You write like a student I had about twenty years ...You write like a student I had about twenty years ago when I was young and dumb. Had to ace her and get her out of my life before I did something stupid. Outstanding!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.thefredeffect.com" rel="nofollow">TheFredEffect</a>Fred Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09660937700796431860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-44557381458606653992010-07-26T07:14:58.538-04:002010-07-26T07:14:58.538-04:00Rene,
you are
soo very good at this.
i'd rath...Rene,<br />you are<br />soo very good at this.<br /><br />i'd rather read you than<br />any other famous literary poet...<br />but now they are in good company!<br /><br />of you.Chuck Dilmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02943387105378540037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-33871234073941558372010-07-25T23:56:08.526-04:002010-07-25T23:56:08.526-04:00cool words!cool words!Feisty Cronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02821808042889216134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-53458858339161708012010-07-25T23:55:29.544-04:002010-07-25T23:55:29.544-04:00a sliver of light under a bolted door...
As an ar...<i>a sliver of light under a bolted door...</i><br /><br />As an architect, I'm a sucker for a well-turned phrase that invokes building pieces, and light.<br /><br />Marvelous.Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.com