tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post7171428926463267098..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: miss firecrackerAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-23956012951814105652011-06-26T20:07:13.012-04:002011-06-26T20:07:13.012-04:00Jean Simmons in "Elmer Gantry" comes to ...Jean Simmons in "Elmer Gantry" comes to mind here. Excellent write.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-80528061725074886522011-06-26T14:23:26.126-04:002011-06-26T14:23:26.126-04:00Pure intensity in true 'Rene' fashion!Pure intensity in true 'Rene' fashion!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-72048161591891448362011-06-25T10:56:56.316-04:002011-06-25T10:56:56.316-04:00You are a riot of feeling and beauty.You are a riot of feeling and beauty.Fred Millerhttp://thefredeffect.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-46143361950865419452011-06-24T17:44:08.217-04:002011-06-24T17:44:08.217-04:00Oh, my....this is a (fire) cracker of a write!Oh, my....this is a (fire) cracker of a write!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-35898033023409257072011-06-24T09:10:45.796-04:002011-06-24T09:10:45.796-04:00Amazing I loved the story it was emotional and ver...Amazing I loved the story it was emotional and very engagingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-22238007315812979122011-06-23T05:26:35.392-04:002011-06-23T05:26:35.392-04:00Wow.Wow.The Ramblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10409123245867533569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-45770202102125864442011-06-22T23:22:58.581-04:002011-06-22T23:22:58.581-04:00This one sings! I love it.This one sings! I love it.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-16127841414417778732011-06-22T17:15:02.554-04:002011-06-22T17:15:02.554-04:00Halleluja!
I can hear your voice, you know, in yo...Halleluja!<br /><br />I can hear your voice, you know, in your writing...<br /><br />PearlPearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05261369905176088917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-24298229066789556142011-06-22T16:33:50.352-04:002011-06-22T16:33:50.352-04:00whoooaaa!! Beautifully written!
I guess love find...whoooaaa!! Beautifully written! <br />I guess love finds us going all blind after all..doesn't it?! :)<br />I hope she had true affection hidden under that fiery exterior of hers... *sigh*Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-43726861863543823602011-06-22T11:34:59.574-04:002011-06-22T11:34:59.574-04:00a trumpet call
that peeled the wrath from the grap...a trumpet call<br />that peeled the wrath from the grape<br /><br />Sizzling! :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-37191640129960874262011-06-22T11:03:55.347-04:002011-06-22T11:03:55.347-04:00Strong feeling to it with added complexity, nice p...Strong feeling to it with added complexity, nice piece.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-12372374939435268742011-06-22T10:49:52.853-04:002011-06-22T10:49:52.853-04:00a fascinatingly charismatic character, intense!a fascinatingly charismatic character, intense!Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-46552500319547648462011-06-22T09:23:31.283-04:002011-06-22T09:23:31.283-04:00"her smile was a trumpet call
that peeled the..."her smile was a trumpet call<br />that peeled the wrath from the grape"<br /><br />Great lines throughout, the one above made me smile, great wordplay, allusion, and dynamic poetic writing.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-1985906752153429592011-06-22T03:19:07.912-04:002011-06-22T03:19:07.912-04:00I enjoyed your poem very much. I especially liked...I enjoyed your poem very much. I especially liked your 'taxis full of grace'<br /><br />best wishes, IsabelIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-14648400984927228342011-06-21T23:32:49.917-04:002011-06-21T23:32:49.917-04:00Wow, I think this Miss Firecracker was surpressing...Wow, I think this Miss Firecracker was surpressing a bit of her shadow in that kiss of hand....love the complexity of the whole...a delight for a discussion group...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-61461284906357365142011-06-21T20:07:50.753-04:002011-06-21T20:07:50.753-04:00Aiiieee! Hey, now! Can I get a witness?
Testimo...Aiiieee! Hey, now! Can I get a witness?<br /><br />Testimony, sister! This is <i>good</i>.Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-68160879579744605332011-06-21T19:21:56.487-04:002011-06-21T19:21:56.487-04:00A brilliant bit of distress and disappointment her...A brilliant bit of distress and disappointment here. So many possibilities, but the reality? Just wrong. Nice write.<br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/21/beyond-the-portal/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-61074765196456276892011-06-21T19:00:36.697-04:002011-06-21T19:00:36.697-04:00the name on the hand pressed to the lips...delish....the name on the hand pressed to the lips...delish...oh she loves you but no for herself...ugh...a little water thrown on the altar fire....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-10090329949848157862011-06-21T18:49:37.872-04:002011-06-21T18:49:37.872-04:00"she wrote my name in her hand
and pressed it..."she wrote my name in her hand<br />and pressed it to my lips"<br /> but<br />"she did not want me for her<br />she wanted me for Him"<br /><br />ah, whooooosh! that hurts.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.com