tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post7159245172159624270..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: the beckoningAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-53587309024724680582013-03-28T01:55:36.872-04:002013-03-28T01:55:36.872-04:00nicely done. Some really nice lines in here and a...nicely done. Some really nice lines in here and a really strong framing in the opening and close of the poem itself. Enjoyed. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-13932077674128303492013-03-26T19:01:07.387-04:002013-03-26T19:01:07.387-04:00This is an incredibly smooth read. I love it. The ...This is an incredibly smooth read. I love it. The poem really requires more than one reading. You have to dig for meaning, which in my opinion makes it great. Jessica Lynn Langhttp://www.ambrielrev.com/solitude/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25817600545567922492013-03-26T17:16:23.957-04:002013-03-26T17:16:23.957-04:00Your poems are always so emotional, and I love tha...Your poems are always so emotional, and I love that about them. My favourite line in this was the "toast and jam, and ring a ring o' roses". Now I just want toast and a cup of Irish Breakfast tea. Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-81935610665557823112013-03-26T17:02:02.503-04:002013-03-26T17:02:02.503-04:00The details are the very source of expression in a...The details are the very source of expression in architecture. But we are caught in a vice between art and the bottom line.<br />Arthur Erickson quote<br />Rene :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-3639754186239981242013-03-26T16:53:59.549-04:002013-03-26T16:53:59.549-04:00Thanks , I've recently been looking for inform...Thanks , I've recently been looking for information about this topic for a while and yours is the greatest I've came upon so far.<br />But, what about the bottom line? Are you sure in regards to <br />the source?<br /><br />Here is my web blog :: <a href="http://studentproject.de/index.php5?title=Benutzer:EmeliaTat" rel="nofollow">brother and sister quotes</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-53333934202398738882013-03-26T11:31:22.904-04:002013-03-26T11:31:22.904-04:00 My favorite line:
a lamp in every laugh, cough a... My favorite line:<br /><br />a lamp in every laugh, cough and footstep<br /><br />Very nice.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-14072308666323243902013-03-26T10:25:14.941-04:002013-03-26T10:25:14.941-04:00Oh so sad how such sweet beginnings can end this w...Oh so sad how such sweet beginnings can end this way. Nice write!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-20574835554116805272013-03-25T13:40:55.067-04:002013-03-25T13:40:55.067-04:00nice read Rene! Enjoyed this quite a bit!nice read Rene! Enjoyed this quite a bit!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-1334173369902040022013-03-25T12:47:25.127-04:002013-03-25T12:47:25.127-04:00As always, lovely writing from the lovely Rene.As always, lovely writing from the lovely Rene.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-79931465952158557892013-03-25T05:37:02.866-04:002013-03-25T05:37:02.866-04:00nice - captured the image very well really enjoyed...nice - captured the image very well really enjoyed your poem - Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-57232632346010393362013-03-25T05:35:21.575-04:002013-03-25T05:35:21.575-04:00An irresistible journey this, even if we do not ne...An irresistible journey this, even if we do not necessarily know the destination. Fine write.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-20910894756824817262013-03-25T00:37:51.022-04:002013-03-25T00:37:51.022-04:00cool poemcool poemMichaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18164471310146247950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-61763107222714542442013-03-25T00:26:51.853-04:002013-03-25T00:26:51.853-04:00This is very captivating from the first line '...This is very captivating from the first line 'it started off well enough' to the very last. Lovely writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-85344823505940856602013-03-24T22:26:36.041-04:002013-03-24T22:26:36.041-04:00smiles...enjoyed...each day is an adventure in fin...smiles...enjoyed...each day is an adventure in finding those wonders...they surround us...as do those lights when we look for them...mine today is in snow...i wasnt really looking forward to it, but standing on the porch tonight i appreciated its hush...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-2810980610396281892013-03-24T22:23:14.777-04:002013-03-24T22:23:14.777-04:00I so enjoyed this, especially the last stanza!I so enjoyed this, especially the last stanza!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-29293750866355759852013-03-24T22:14:29.061-04:002013-03-24T22:14:29.061-04:00A lampo in every laugh... a light in every being.A lampo in every laugh... a light in every being.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-59822948015958758402013-03-24T19:28:19.524-04:002013-03-24T19:28:19.524-04:00Nicely knitted, not too tight, not too loose.Nicely knitted, not too tight, not too loose.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-75035804590040838782013-03-24T15:42:03.389-04:002013-03-24T15:42:03.389-04:00Very well done! Admirable!Very well done! Admirable!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-64985434508896475482013-03-24T14:18:30.805-04:002013-03-24T14:18:30.805-04:00Love the second stanza best ~ Cheers ~Love the second stanza best ~ Cheers ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8495862348974691872013-03-24T13:22:48.547-04:002013-03-24T13:22:48.547-04:00Enjoyed this, Rene. A lamp in every laugh... that&...Enjoyed this, Rene. A lamp in every laugh... that's a great line.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-6245421945723437582013-03-24T11:53:44.001-04:002013-03-24T11:53:44.001-04:00I liked these words....I would take my leave too! ...I liked these words....I would take my leave too! Ha<br />Hugs<br />SueAnnSueannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05299288406218968621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-15588241464328251272013-03-24T11:40:40.054-04:002013-03-24T11:40:40.054-04:00'it started out well enough'...
For some ...'it started out well enough'... <br />For some reason I really like that line. It kind of makes the whole poem work. Now, where's my penny!!!<br /><br />Nissa Annakindthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289000116822109714noreply@blogger.com