tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post6926943014755455813..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: maraAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-82102316217410931652012-07-23T23:30:17.047-04:002012-07-23T23:30:17.047-04:00wow...darkness and that painting. Oh my.wow...darkness and that painting. Oh my.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-73374930992494039532012-07-21T19:44:20.853-04:002012-07-21T19:44:20.853-04:00Rene, those last four lines are particularly strik...Rene, those last four lines are particularly striking. Thanks for being a part of FBF, but just one note for future reference, dearie...the prompt asks for a new poem, not a repost. K? Oh, I know, the devil made you do it...Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-81915063177864969672012-07-21T02:31:10.009-04:002012-07-21T02:31:10.009-04:00madness prevailsmadness prevailsKerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8969265213413027642012-07-21T02:19:40.683-04:002012-07-21T02:19:40.683-04:00"the soul, a marionette, hijacked"........."the soul, a marionette, hijacked"......wow, kiddo, powerful writing!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-36770749700289814692012-07-21T01:22:46.656-04:002012-07-21T01:22:46.656-04:00"the body a vessel
the soul
a marionette
hija..."the body a vessel<br />the soul<br />a marionette<br />hijacked, voiceless"<br /><br />Cornered, used, no choice--nightmare!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-90624212203534067752012-04-07T05:04:11.461-04:002012-04-07T05:04:11.461-04:00wow - wonderful wordswow - wonderful wordsJENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06098666035423087050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-18557776231798089612012-04-04T11:21:50.170-04:002012-04-04T11:21:50.170-04:00Love it. Especially the ending.
=)Love it. Especially the ending.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-59587143627670179292012-04-04T04:57:39.831-04:002012-04-04T04:57:39.831-04:00Loved the image of burnt paper flakes ascending - ...Loved the image of burnt paper flakes ascending - like a sacrificial prayer, perhaps?Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-16515042431362242672012-04-03T15:45:56.170-04:002012-04-03T15:45:56.170-04:00Wonderful poem.
A painful picture you painted wit...Wonderful poem.<br /><br />A painful picture you painted with your words but beautiful said with strong emotions.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-40719887049024868372012-04-02T23:46:11.046-04:002012-04-02T23:46:11.046-04:00If I were to select my favorite line or image, thi...If I were to select my favorite line or image, this entire piece would be selected. Exquisite, powerful, breathtaking.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-4018941256982678752012-04-02T14:12:56.719-04:002012-04-02T14:12:56.719-04:00a big cry for help. but we help ourselves when we ...a big cry for help. but we help ourselves when we awaken.<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/04/02/semantic-feeling/" rel="nofollow">semantic feeling</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-10365002501357548382012-04-02T13:22:09.161-04:002012-04-02T13:22:09.161-04:00So much to love about this, esp:
"when the d...So much to love about this, esp: <br />"when the dark presses<br />faith<br />scatters like paper<br />lit on fire" <br /><br />and<br /><br />"help me<br />if you can<br />reach me<br />here i am"Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-20740979911513241862012-04-02T00:10:03.933-04:002012-04-02T00:10:03.933-04:00powerful indeed....well done and thanks for sharin...powerful indeed....well done and thanks for sharing these wordsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-45047917300603216752012-04-01T18:53:49.205-04:002012-04-01T18:53:49.205-04:00Stunning piece!Stunning piece!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-62275098487026027882012-04-01T17:43:27.646-04:002012-04-01T17:43:27.646-04:00So few words, but so rich in imagery and meaning. ...So few words, but so rich in imagery and meaning. I applaud you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-28875896036462912732012-04-01T17:35:36.038-04:002012-04-01T17:35:36.038-04:00This piece is one of the most skilfully written pi...This piece is one of the most skilfully written pieces ever and for me right now it hits a nerve!Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-10511116680723794882012-04-01T16:25:07.689-04:002012-04-01T16:25:07.689-04:00Excellent! I really love the desperation and the r...Excellent! I really love the desperation and the rhythm.<br /><br />This is my favorite:<br />"when the dark presses<br />faith<br />scatters like paper<br />lit on fire"<br /><br />rosemarymint.wordpress.com✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-45785172481635859552012-04-01T16:15:57.079-04:002012-04-01T16:15:57.079-04:00Superb, wonderful, wonderful words!
Anna :o]Superb, wonderful, wonderful words!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-21817423754081903882012-04-01T16:01:09.519-04:002012-04-01T16:01:09.519-04:00So powerful and so powerless all at the same time,...So powerful and so powerless all at the same time, Rene. I have been in the places where your poem dwells. Thank you for sharing this expressive work. The picture at the end adds poignancy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-41832669106514451882012-04-01T15:03:04.055-04:002012-04-01T15:03:04.055-04:00I don't think I'll sleep tonight...very po...I don't think I'll sleep tonight...very powerful!Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-48076965482020646382012-04-01T10:50:37.223-04:002012-04-01T10:50:37.223-04:00I like it.. Sme good new lines for me too..
JJRod...I like it.. Sme good new lines for me too..<br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-49265687239755481032012-04-01T10:48:19.584-04:002012-04-01T10:48:19.584-04:00the soul a marionette, that's interesting con...the soul a marionette, that's interesting concept. hijacked marionette is even better.<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/in-the-dragons-nest/" rel="nofollow">in the dragon's nest</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-29316398795283941732012-04-01T10:14:01.087-04:002012-04-01T10:14:01.087-04:00Beautiful write, Rene. I especially like "......Beautiful write, Rene. I especially like "...prayers soaked in sour wine<br />blister the tongue unanswered..."Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-32228497542768402782012-04-01T09:16:24.597-04:002012-04-01T09:16:24.597-04:00I've felt this in what is known as sleep paral...I've felt this in what is known as sleep paralysis. The prayers are not answered and the presence of evil is terrible. Your poem captures that terror that stifles all cries for help.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-11104242116616142652012-04-01T01:58:01.876-04:002012-04-01T01:58:01.876-04:00Fantastic imagery - not a single word out of place...Fantastic imagery - not a single word out of place - I love thisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com