tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post6105522757664858010..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: rookieAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-16362332140615639402013-03-29T19:26:17.360-04:002013-03-29T19:26:17.360-04:00Like this one very much. I recall my first kiss as...Like this one very much. I recall my first kiss as being dreadful, all teeth etc. Nice poem! Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-15447116685369421382013-03-21T19:09:56.248-04:002013-03-21T19:09:56.248-04:00Agree, first instincts generally carry what our he...Agree, first instincts generally carry what our hearts see. A smile lives in the awkwardness so expressed; a confirming nod of shared emotion. Nicely written, Rene.Walt Wojtanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02723314300320671675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-85976034914709847932013-03-21T15:40:58.972-04:002013-03-21T15:40:58.972-04:00Ha Rene this was a hoot
First kiss
not at all bli...Ha Rene this was a hoot<br /><br />First kiss<br />not at all bliss<br />didn't know what to do<br />could wait til you were through<br /><br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-55735391943913398552013-03-21T14:46:41.332-04:002013-03-21T14:46:41.332-04:00This is wonderful in its innocence, realism and ho...This is wonderful in its innocence, realism and honesty!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-69323563851025998642013-03-21T14:46:20.140-04:002013-03-21T14:46:20.140-04:00Ummmmmm.........I STILL am not sure how it's d...Ummmmmm.........I STILL am not sure how it's done? And now I'm too old? Yes, all the teeth and tongues. This is a hilarious poem. I am still smiling!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-9827241840982980362013-03-21T03:51:02.383-04:002013-03-21T03:51:02.383-04:00...every 'first' defines the truth in us........every 'first' defines the truth in us... the innocence, awkwardness, flaws, the chuckle, fear, everything that def polished in the second coming for it has already been experienced... smiles... kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-28519108498122899772013-03-21T02:00:11.896-04:002013-03-21T02:00:11.896-04:00Excellent, brought back memories of that first kis...Excellent, brought back memories of that first kiss and how i upset Jane Carter. Those were the day. I loved this very well done. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25105827498350333942013-03-20T22:05:27.136-04:002013-03-20T22:05:27.136-04:00You got it, Brian!
I was trying to convey the imma...You got it, Brian!<br />I was trying to convey the immaturity and awkwardness<br />Still....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-24934715388603631242013-03-20T21:49:25.998-04:002013-03-20T21:49:25.998-04:00ha. i like your little emoticon figures at the end...ha. i like your little emoticon figures at the ends of lines...it is telling in how young she was...and that first experience we get a little lost in the mechanics of it...ha...and it can be a little gross....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-63135999972632509372013-03-20T21:22:37.344-04:002013-03-20T21:22:37.344-04:00This was my first reaction to the reaction prompt....This was my first reaction to the reaction prompt...gotta go with your gut sometimes :) plus I wanted to write something fun and light! Thanks for stopping by, Kim, always a pleasure.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-17745880267677337832013-03-20T21:08:43.037-04:002013-03-20T21:08:43.037-04:00What a hilarious response to the reaction prompt, ...What a hilarious response to the reaction prompt, Rene! First you made me laugh aloud, then inspired some recollections. I thank you for both. Well played!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.com