tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post3901424778068865180..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: loverAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-69665216390844143672012-11-13T01:12:22.018-05:002012-11-13T01:12:22.018-05:00I love the "steely eyed confidence." Ma...I love the "steely eyed confidence." May you find your own strength...~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-4200414966539885032012-11-06T15:18:32.567-05:002012-11-06T15:18:32.567-05:00I really liked this:
it doesn't matter
that y...I really liked this:<br /><br />it doesn't matter<br />that you leave me<br />stuck<br />between hard places<br /><br />Really good work, Rene!Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-55772498266613592102012-11-06T11:51:12.488-05:002012-11-06T11:51:12.488-05:00Well captured - a strength and defiance in your fi...Well captured - a strength and defiance in your fine words.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-70243735089596714302012-11-06T05:57:09.877-05:002012-11-06T05:57:09.877-05:00Very poignant , like a long march , thanks ReneVery poignant , like a long march , thanks ReneSilent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-57561232877242446062012-11-05T20:16:27.219-05:002012-11-05T20:16:27.219-05:00Great poem. I think the secret is to be your own b...Great poem. I think the secret is to be your own best friend.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-1046650973353308132012-11-05T15:36:16.946-05:002012-11-05T15:36:16.946-05:00...I wish you well my friend.
Oh, how I have lo......I wish you well my friend. <br /><br />Oh, how I have longed to "really" mean that at times. I would have been much better off. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8124638077892929472012-11-05T13:54:43.213-05:002012-11-05T13:54:43.213-05:00Whether of not this reflects your true feelings, y...Whether of not this reflects your true feelings, you concisely palpable conveyed emotion and connection. I admire your brevity and clarity.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-79488934253126724212012-11-04T21:06:03.051-05:002012-11-04T21:06:03.051-05:00I think you captured her perfectly!I think you captured her perfectly!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-50734906016989912882012-11-04T18:15:12.851-05:002012-11-04T18:15:12.851-05:00I love the strength in the photo, so well reflecte...I love the strength in the photo, so well reflected in your poem - great idea for a challenge, and wonderful response. I especially love "every scar a sacred valley."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-28364885946139852352012-11-04T16:48:03.683-05:002012-11-04T16:48:03.683-05:00Yep, we feel the pain but have to move on hopefull...Yep, we feel the pain but have to move on hopefully with grace but not always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-83706175402919483812012-11-04T15:51:29.411-05:002012-11-04T15:51:29.411-05:00Beautiful...search Google Images Charis Weston...s...Beautiful...search Google Images Charis Weston...she's as confident as you write... Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56488758171693518802012-11-04T15:49:08.210-05:002012-11-04T15:49:08.210-05:00naw. I think i just rent my truths :)
naw. I think i just rent my truths :)<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-89423257140135237042012-11-04T15:46:40.596-05:002012-11-04T15:46:40.596-05:00i own my truths
and my lies
with steely eyed
conf...i own my truths<br />and my lies<br />with steely eyed <br />confidence<br /><br />Love that stanza. That's not you? Not me either...maybe that's why I love it so.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56830146156988432452012-11-04T07:24:37.882-05:002012-11-04T07:24:37.882-05:00One of the many healthy responses to rejection -- ...One of the many healthy responses to rejection -- your own clear garden, and no temptation to forget pleasures.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-84461628463267136982012-11-04T04:27:28.812-05:002012-11-04T04:27:28.812-05:00Beautiful piece. Loved it! Thank you for choosin...Beautiful piece. Loved it! Thank you for choosing one of my pics.<br />Hugs<br />SueAnnSueannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05299288406218968621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-62193130384493046522012-11-04T01:11:16.323-04:002012-11-04T01:11:16.323-04:00Nice take on a fenceNice take on a fencemarousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-67003347891326955002012-11-03T23:10:47.349-04:002012-11-03T23:10:47.349-04:00when i read the toady prompt the poem becomes harm...when i read the toady prompt the poem becomes harmonic with its antithesis. dissonance.lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-59708245818056461602012-11-03T19:22:33.785-04:002012-11-03T19:22:33.785-04:00Sometimes I wish a fence is all that it would take...Sometimes I wish a fence is all that it would take to create distance and mute pain, but as you, a fence is what it is, and I will always see the otherside, regardless. Very nice write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-32163007347258808342012-11-03T19:17:23.126-04:002012-11-03T19:17:23.126-04:00was just about to quote the same lines as festival...was just about to quote the same lines as festivalking up there... till i saw she already did it. loved them.<br />great work, great poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-29765044940434988712012-11-03T18:51:23.325-04:002012-11-03T18:51:23.325-04:00"every fold
a triumphant valley
every scar
a ..."every fold<br />a triumphant valley<br />every scar<br />a sacred highway"<br /><br />And so it should be my dear!<br /><br />A lovely piece :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-15541050350836558232012-11-03T18:22:10.722-04:002012-11-03T18:22:10.722-04:00for some of us...it's like we never leave high...for some of us...it's like we never leave high schoolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56376911003300971232012-11-03T18:12:11.302-04:002012-11-03T18:12:11.302-04:00yep. plenty o' the bafflin' goin' on &...yep. plenty o' the bafflin' goin' on 'round here...it was a pleasure to find a wedge of time to throw some bull.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-66244189963145302722012-11-03T18:09:29.089-04:002012-11-03T18:09:29.089-04:00I love Kerry's comment! What a treat to see th...I love Kerry's comment! What a treat to see that you've done my challenge, Rene. You know what they say...if you can't dazzle 'em with brilliance, baffle 'em with bullshit!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-48917083893356422942012-11-03T17:30:07.966-04:002012-11-03T17:30:07.966-04:00This was a tough read ... sounds like we both have...This was a tough read ... sounds like we both have had to deal with the 'you're not good enough .. will never fit in' mentality. I hear strength in your words, Rene.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-10808130859500558072012-11-03T17:25:22.071-04:002012-11-03T17:25:22.071-04:00Nice, Rene... I especially live stanzas 2 & 4....Nice, Rene... I especially live stanzas 2 & 4.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com