tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post3654915342933555148..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: sirenAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-4340614619838042682013-03-21T16:40:08.542-04:002013-03-21T16:40:08.542-04:00Dark and delicious...Dark and delicious...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-71462912572111413542013-03-20T19:42:39.857-04:002013-03-20T19:42:39.857-04:00Siren songs are irresistible ... as is your poem.Siren songs are irresistible ... as is your poem.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-47737404597760219562013-03-20T09:14:45.802-04:002013-03-20T09:14:45.802-04:00Sailors are so easily led astray - or at least tha...Sailors are so easily led astray - or at least that's their almost universal reputation. The stanza form and enjambment add a lot to this poem, Rene. I love the siren legends; thankfully the only sirens I've heard were on emergency vehicles.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-71622412519992253612013-03-20T01:10:34.224-04:002013-03-20T01:10:34.224-04:00The 4, 6, 2 works really effectively to show the p...The 4, 6, 2 works really effectively to show the power of the siren.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-34302333397760157082013-03-19T21:24:59.610-04:002013-03-19T21:24:59.610-04:00Your enjambment is quite effective in this, Rene.
...Your enjambment is quite effective in this, Rene.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-48412263533838852742013-03-19T20:21:22.091-04:002013-03-19T20:21:22.091-04:00Hah! Or sing yer own damn songs... :)Hah! Or sing yer own damn songs... :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-47185514031158117362013-03-19T19:47:14.899-04:002013-03-19T19:47:14.899-04:00Ah well. Sometimes a girl feels like singing, and ...Ah well. Sometimes a girl feels like singing, and sometimes she doesn't. Buy a cd player. ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-1555844305500134322013-03-19T19:17:45.440-04:002013-03-19T19:17:45.440-04:00Very impressive Very impressive Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-31447899438725475042013-03-19T19:06:00.850-04:002013-03-19T19:06:00.850-04:00I ain't easy, but I can be had.I ain't easy, but I can be had. Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-64786683913284604862013-03-19T16:25:03.889-04:002013-03-19T16:25:03.889-04:00Interesting structure and imagery, well written.Interesting structure and imagery, well written.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-40190852155366194662013-03-19T16:18:07.430-04:002013-03-19T16:18:07.430-04:00the empty reward
how many of us fall for that
grea...the empty reward<br />how many of us fall for that<br />great work!HisFireFlyhttp://hisfirefly.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-87624262373832722542013-03-19T15:40:28.075-04:002013-03-19T15:40:28.075-04:00Whew, this is good. Specially like: now you dr...Whew, this is good. Specially like: now you dream, of diving black horses, screaming ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-6326021932889432562013-03-18T22:21:22.087-04:002013-03-18T22:21:22.087-04:00dang...he sure was a sucker eh? got her hooks in a...dang...he sure was a sucker eh? got her hooks in and then denied him...and yet he still will not give up, she now owning his freedom...cool write rene and nice form too..<br /><br />smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-2424945556053024042013-03-18T19:59:06.939-04:002013-03-18T19:59:06.939-04:00Beautiful imagery and rhyme meeting a frightful en...Beautiful imagery and rhyme meeting a frightful end.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-54602989687901811502013-03-18T07:06:35.785-04:002013-03-18T07:06:35.785-04:00Thanks! I just chose to use a 4,6,2 verse on this....Thanks! I just chose to use a 4,6,2 verse on this. It felt right while reading.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25293323123585651652013-03-18T05:31:55.707-04:002013-03-18T05:31:55.707-04:00Nimble and inventive; very well done...Nimble and inventive; very well done...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-77809949000040240172013-03-18T05:28:51.444-04:002013-03-18T05:28:51.444-04:00Begging, screaming, silence - what a great set of ...Begging, screaming, silence - what a great set of words to end those stanzasJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-24409116381951222742013-03-18T02:48:21.361-04:002013-03-18T02:48:21.361-04:00neat poem- is this just a 4,6,2 syllable verse or...neat poem- is this just a 4,6,2 syllable verse or a named form you are using? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-10278251590697403632013-03-17T23:14:16.848-04:002013-03-17T23:14:16.848-04:00Sirens be like that, yoSirens be like that, yoAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-75724598752676168992013-03-17T23:11:27.102-04:002013-03-17T23:11:27.102-04:00good lord- she is a strict disciplanarian... spare...good lord- she is a strict disciplanarian... spare me her diatribes...Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-69996955191084164432013-03-17T22:46:31.499-04:002013-03-17T22:46:31.499-04:00nicely done.....thanks for sharing wordsnicely done.....thanks for sharing wordsWaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14873809564739628512noreply@blogger.com