tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post2925937248784117670..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: that's what sea said...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-45267408124818154332011-03-04T07:54:24.633-05:002011-03-04T07:54:24.633-05:00Psalms of moody indigo... lovely.. I enjoyed it so...Psalms of moody indigo... lovely.. I enjoyed it so much...<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-winter-dew.html<br />Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-57104637727075271242011-03-03T10:35:44.648-05:002011-03-03T10:35:44.648-05:00ah - i love the psalms
of moody indigo...ah - i love the psalms<br />of moody indigo...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-9196331423878964412011-03-03T07:55:54.803-05:002011-03-03T07:55:54.803-05:00I had to read this twice for the joy of it.I had to read this twice for the joy of it.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-33574880006440009442011-03-02T19:14:04.571-05:002011-03-02T19:14:04.571-05:00Ohhh... this is simply BEAUTIFUL!!! I knew that se...Ohhh... this is simply BEAUTIFUL!!! I knew that seas could be charming in their "appearances"... but now mannerisms too?! Woowww...<br /><br />I just loved this personification, Rene!! Lovely...and soooo romantic! I can feel the salty water crystallizing on my skin... like gentle hands stopping me...Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-90103983439410765542011-03-02T18:04:47.790-05:002011-03-02T18:04:47.790-05:00Ah, the title drew me in
and I drowned in beautyAh, the title drew me in<br />and I drowned in beautySuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-40060909260255682882011-03-02T16:24:22.446-05:002011-03-02T16:24:22.446-05:00Wonderful, leave 'em breathless, great flow wo...Wonderful, leave 'em breathless, great flow work.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-63022148309770290232011-03-02T01:36:40.705-05:002011-03-02T01:36:40.705-05:00Your pounding, swelling, ebbing, effervescence
Wha...Your pounding, swelling, ebbing, effervescence<br />What better lover could I have <br />Than the one who licks my bare feet<br />With a salty, sand encrusted tongue.<br /><br />OneLove--Tiger WindwalkerBig Sur Blogispherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-49695533438874010112011-03-02T01:21:52.635-05:002011-03-02T01:21:52.635-05:00Such a wonderful teacher she is, luring us with me...Such a wonderful teacher she is, luring us with melodies, guiding our sails by the tide, mesmerizing moments, split second reactions... teaching us to feel rather than think... feel the ebbs pulling.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-33534527594449263542011-03-01T20:27:17.303-05:002011-03-01T20:27:17.303-05:00Beautiful tribute to the sea...and what a gracious...Beautiful tribute to the sea...and what a gracious and always giving teacher she is...giving us music and poetry and renewing wisdom...blessings...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-87743490782297999872011-03-01T20:16:08.197-05:002011-03-01T20:16:08.197-05:00the cradle of us all, and a true teacher. You'...the cradle of us all, and a true teacher. You've used color, image and rhythm really well here to evoke the salt never-quenching smell of the sea.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-48998644763296647082011-03-01T19:53:22.112-05:002011-03-01T19:53:22.112-05:00Oh this is wonderful, and what attentive writing, ...Oh this is wonderful, and what attentive writing, your rolling, swelling words and the poem's lovely form...Danielhttp://makesomeonehappy.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-11688337765403601072011-03-01T18:11:25.223-05:002011-03-01T18:11:25.223-05:00Some unique wordplays there that come together in ...Some unique wordplays there that come together in advancing the very sexy tone of the work...tight descriptions.Chris G.http://cianphelan.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-8501697036657631552011-02-28T14:17:08.523-05:002011-02-28T14:17:08.523-05:00I love it, especially the "moody indigo"...I love it, especially the "moody indigo" and the "lustful moon". and the thirsting for the "poetic mouthful". Wow.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-87716043026409512802011-02-28T09:38:13.980-05:002011-02-28T09:38:13.980-05:00yep, this is all hot and and sexy and shit. love i...yep, this is all hot and and sexy and shit. love it, naturally.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-66843744102003642062011-02-28T04:37:45.488-05:002011-02-28T04:37:45.488-05:00the waves that the lines make is a great complimen...the waves that the lines make is a great compliment to the words, which ebb and flow like waves on the shore.ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01545987139627439257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-69749377835345012062011-02-27T20:32:17.807-05:002011-02-27T20:32:17.807-05:00...under the boardwalk,
down by the seeeea...
(si......under the boardwalk,<br />down by the seeeea...<br /><br />(sigh)Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-21215909460105828222011-02-27T12:38:41.328-05:002011-02-27T12:38:41.328-05:00I'm hot for teacher in a very sensuous way.I'm hot for teacher in a very sensuous way.BAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04602091752811951930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-85661553917822224492011-02-27T11:23:28.076-05:002011-02-27T11:23:28.076-05:00Neruda and I agree. I must trek to a seashore at l...Neruda and I agree. I must trek to a seashore at least annually, feel the ocean water on my skin, or all is not right. <br />And, oh! Your poem is incredibly warm and sensuous. Love it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-2866339113942166372011-02-27T04:35:49.240-05:002011-02-27T04:35:49.240-05:00ok, its the title that sent me there...but my mind...ok, its the title that sent me there...but my mind went straight to the gutter....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-48043714561855120462011-02-27T02:09:36.056-05:002011-02-27T02:09:36.056-05:00I was driving down the freeway today, north toward...I was driving down the freeway today, north towards the mountains that surround three sides of our town, and I thought you would have to write a poem about them. Every peak was dusted with snow and Shasta and Lassen are almost all white. Bright, clear and cold day in Northern California.<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />CaseyCasey Freelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01258967374124497696noreply@blogger.com