tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post2269807807041273408..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: St. JohnsburyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-2131882272709827512014-05-25T07:09:23.724-04:002014-05-25T07:09:23.724-04:00Mastery of words - magic :-)Mastery of words - magic :-)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-66823975691121349722014-05-22T22:12:25.510-04:002014-05-22T22:12:25.510-04:00i ate this up.
i just seem to be
a bit stuck
A...i ate this up. <br /><br />i just seem to be<br /><br />a bit stuck<br /><br />And the lighter shade of resignation?<br /><br /><br />brilliance.Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-66612645352673393812014-05-21T12:55:17.648-04:002014-05-21T12:55:17.648-04:00Feeling a bit stuck is not good. Great write!Feeling a bit stuck is not good. Great write!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-86803744211167085562014-05-21T02:34:42.219-04:002014-05-21T02:34:42.219-04:00"a lighter shade of resignation "
Wish ..."a lighter shade of resignation "<br /><br />Wish I'd thought of that: such a fine phrase.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-52670655196059606102014-05-21T02:05:43.192-04:002014-05-21T02:05:43.192-04:00I loved this, partly because it's a horribly r...I loved this, partly because it's a horribly recognisable situation, when we can't say what we really need to. Lovely imagery, moving from the coffee to the clouds to her exhalation.<br /><br />http://thenarratorslibrary.blogspot.com/2014/05/magpie-tales-tea-for-two-dinner-for-one.htmlRhissannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09001501916407616825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-16993682545106492422014-05-20T18:10:33.180-04:002014-05-20T18:10:33.180-04:00Heartfelt indeed.Heartfelt indeed.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-58558929463599745842014-05-20T10:51:36.359-04:002014-05-20T10:51:36.359-04:00Things that mean the most and are closest to our h...Things that mean the most and are closest to our heart as well as truth - are the ones we leave unspoken. Beautifully penned. Great work with the prompt. Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-61961220082675497512014-05-19T15:02:10.911-04:002014-05-19T15:02:10.911-04:00Oh this is really sad . . . Oh this is really sad . . . Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-3576507761537676732014-05-19T12:28:50.422-04:002014-05-19T12:28:50.422-04:00Beautiful...Beautiful...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-66317469818332995982014-05-19T12:07:25.694-04:002014-05-19T12:07:25.694-04:00Perfect,Perfect,Cait O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04569760764766505179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-78264701144859091352014-05-19T00:58:14.776-04:002014-05-19T00:58:14.776-04:00"a lighter shade of resignation"...becom..."a lighter shade of resignation"...becomes so significant...nice lines..<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-49157649516001413122014-05-18T20:29:40.138-04:002014-05-18T20:29:40.138-04:00Portent and atmosphere - you nailed it!Portent and atmosphere - you nailed it!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-57798128480541457492014-05-18T20:18:43.460-04:002014-05-18T20:18:43.460-04:00I love how you use the stanza about pouring creame...I love how you use the stanza about pouring creamer into coffee to create just the right atmosphere for your big reveal.Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.com