tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post1608984783794725449..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: The Good Luck ManAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-49429938173120174632011-10-23T17:04:24.819-04:002011-10-23T17:04:24.819-04:00I like the sounds of this poem...musicality. and t...I like the sounds of this poem...musicality. and the allusions are rich. the other, the good luck man.<br />good persona piece.tinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25016009781889928732011-10-23T16:18:58.412-04:002011-10-23T16:18:58.412-04:00There's a fantasy element along with the exoti...There's a fantasy element along with the exotic one in this - nice, musical language. I like the play between red sieve, umbrella and bag: withhold, leach or hold, depending on how that good luck is concocted.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-36896196023278835532011-10-23T16:14:42.004-04:002011-10-23T16:14:42.004-04:00nice i remember this one...
whats up with all tho...nice i remember this one...<br /><br />whats up with all those links below?Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-87473569162776814352011-10-23T13:27:10.263-04:002011-10-23T13:27:10.263-04:00Oh this is so good, and so different, Rene. I espe...Oh this is so good, and so different, Rene. I especially like:<br /><br />a mackerel sky messenger<br />on yang tiger back<br /><br />But really, I love the entire thing.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-26943132080481039982011-10-23T13:02:36.384-04:002011-10-23T13:02:36.384-04:00Sparse, yet every word delightfully full of allusi...Sparse, yet every word delightfully full of allusion, description and message--of course its seive!<br />Enjoyed it Rene. And thanks for stopping by.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-34697076036356431932011-10-23T07:52:11.893-04:002011-10-23T07:52:11.893-04:00strong...love the filling of red bags with courage...strong...love the filling of red bags with courage...and the mackerel sky messenger...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-80340151364125749572011-09-05T18:53:40.907-04:002011-09-05T18:53:40.907-04:00I love this!I love this!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-73532914214381361632011-09-05T15:46:24.544-04:002011-09-05T15:46:24.544-04:00This is tight. I like it. xoThis is tight. I like it. xoAnn Imighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01383249597505013239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-21054605791890739732011-09-05T01:16:13.162-04:002011-09-05T01:16:13.162-04:00I really liked "mackerel sky messenger."...I really liked "mackerel sky messenger."Elliot MacLeod-Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03101422996950773526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-39641267377368490712011-09-04T19:20:12.964-04:002011-09-04T19:20:12.964-04:00red rover, red rover, send the good luck man RIGHT...red rover, red rover, send the good luck man RIGHT OVER.Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-47985881399591585492011-09-04T17:43:45.301-04:002011-09-04T17:43:45.301-04:00So great to come by for a visit and see your blog....So great to come by for a visit and see your blog. And your wonderful work - wow more impressive than ever. Loved this Rene!Lillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14597193176450931002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25240416791602252832011-09-03T10:50:54.855-04:002011-09-03T10:50:54.855-04:00nice rhythm!nice rhythm!Evalinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02978531437469203748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-10247503436197446092011-09-01T21:01:23.705-04:002011-09-01T21:01:23.705-04:00This piece is a journey, and an adventure
on a rai...This piece is a journey, and an adventure<br />on a rainbow of light, where we slide<br />off on the red edge. Made me smile,<br />made me wish for rain and sun breaks<br />and a double rainbow over my new deck.<br />Loved the lines /red umbrella shaman/raising<br /> bark, spreading leaves/ for we all need<br />to interface with this good luck man.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-20051862689185559302011-09-01T13:47:40.172-04:002011-09-01T13:47:40.172-04:00I fill red bags with courage...I like that...kind ...I fill red bags with courage...I like that...kind of a play on red badge of courage...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-20329125025925441022011-09-01T11:42:47.109-04:002011-09-01T11:42:47.109-04:00Love it.
Anna :o]Love it.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-19512095853010660182011-09-01T09:12:12.821-04:002011-09-01T09:12:12.821-04:00a mackerel sky messenger
on yang tiger back
Great...a mackerel sky messenger<br />on yang tiger back<br /><br />Great!Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-83368073734818616002011-08-31T23:56:02.181-04:002011-08-31T23:56:02.181-04:00Absolute delight. From a splash of red you've ...Absolute delight. From a splash of red you've composed an amazing series of images that cause the reader to hold her breath.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-68735050975463380672011-08-31T18:57:59.209-04:002011-08-31T18:57:59.209-04:00I liked the rhythm and pace of this poem and the w...I liked the rhythm and pace of this poem and the wonderful images! I too saw the Chinese characters on the wall and I loved your take using the traditional medicine theme!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-2011538651394295732011-08-31T12:14:00.289-04:002011-08-31T12:14:00.289-04:00I could do with bags of courage...I could do with bags of courage...Cadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56215532281822697982011-08-31T02:18:29.663-04:002011-08-31T02:18:29.663-04:00An inspired interpretation of the prompt. Thank yo...An inspired interpretation of the prompt. Thank you.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-56132777715497025522011-08-31T00:49:28.642-04:002011-08-31T00:49:28.642-04:00"pressed by the heart I wear on my sieve"..."pressed by the heart I wear on my sieve" - okay, I know when you wrote that you gave yourself the ol' self slug in the arm e.g. Breakfast Club.<br /><br />Fantastic.<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />CaseyCasey Freelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01258967374124497696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-35986865234866890032011-08-30T21:04:58.135-04:002011-08-30T21:04:58.135-04:00shaman and mackerel sky in the same piece...you ha...shaman and mackerel sky in the same piece...you have my entranced attention, madam.<br /><br />Shamaness, perhaps?Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-51957925255006784012011-08-30T14:20:36.366-04:002011-08-30T14:20:36.366-04:00This was great fun!This was great fun!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-52296380157529024162011-08-30T13:33:12.183-04:002011-08-30T13:33:12.183-04:00... I am a lonely and a lonesome traveler ... can&...... I am a lonely and a lonesome traveler ... can't get that song out of my head now!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-39075444531357248992011-08-30T09:29:54.463-04:002011-08-30T09:29:54.463-04:00EXCELLENT!!! My favorite stanza:
i am a fortunate...EXCELLENT!!! My favorite stanza:<br /><br />i am a fortunate passenger<br />on an auspicious track<br />a mackerel sky messenger<br />on yang tiger back.<br /><br />A+Fragrant Liarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09452052210826471034noreply@blogger.com