tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post1215252627918253904..comments2023-08-27T04:46:25.640-04:00Comments on Not The Rockefellers: semi-high glossAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-53526413013240497912011-09-06T22:27:06.120-04:002011-09-06T22:27:06.120-04:00and apparently forgot to give my name...and apparently forgot to give my name...jenny_onoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-19203747396741059012011-09-06T22:26:21.460-04:002011-09-06T22:26:21.460-04:00I really like this one.I really like this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-50913970846294808142011-08-22T18:33:35.944-04:002011-08-22T18:33:35.944-04:00Nice rhythm and rhyme to this one!
I love the way...Nice rhythm and rhyme to this one!<br /><br />I love the way words flow here.<br /><br />Now, where is that paint can?Sharon Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00695395104518983907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-64248865002711100362011-08-22T09:16:04.964-04:002011-08-22T09:16:04.964-04:00Rene - love the direction you took with this and t...Rene - love the direction you took with this and the opening stanza hooked me from the start.<br /><br />Great Write!Michael A. Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06015233939646285069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-15218482464045589932011-08-21T00:48:54.076-04:002011-08-21T00:48:54.076-04:00I've always wanted to name paint...or lipstick...I've always wanted to name paint...or lipstick...or fingernail polish.Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13151264293573254738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-1597639158102053102011-08-19T16:04:42.206-04:002011-08-19T16:04:42.206-04:00Banana Whisper! Kansas Corn! ))Banana Whisper! Kansas Corn! ))Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-77387748758684607352011-08-18T10:43:46.056-04:002011-08-18T10:43:46.056-04:00Thank you all for your comments! Don't you thi...Thank you all for your comments! Don't you think the names paint manufacturers give their products are poetry? I wonder what goes into naming paint.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-22653950324857575422011-08-18T07:54:57.735-04:002011-08-18T07:54:57.735-04:00Oooh!I loved your poem...especially the first few ...Oooh!I loved your poem...especially the first few lines...:)Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-46994088933763129742011-08-17T22:00:13.774-04:002011-08-17T22:00:13.774-04:00thanks for the encouragement, IG...I'm always ...thanks for the encouragement, IG...I'm always open to suggestions on any of my writing. <br />Sometimes I gets stuck, y'know.<br /><br />Alyson! Definitely. We will have to arrange something!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-33471748120030317582011-08-17T21:46:58.769-04:002011-08-17T21:46:58.769-04:00I love your way with words! Such imagery! Maybe ...I love your way with words! Such imagery! Maybe now that I live in NH too, I'll be able to hear some of these flowery words in person.Alyson | New England Livinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16209837924378793507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-63758732049061586212011-08-17T21:11:30.118-04:002011-08-17T21:11:30.118-04:00Splendid! Love the Seashells By The Sea revision....Splendid! Love the Seashells By The Sea revision. Much brighter than before.<br /><br />Although I suppose that 'latex' line could work in a piece of much different mood.<br /><br />And? I admire how you boldly go back and change it up. Courage, lass!Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-13472871026069524712011-08-17T20:41:57.476-04:002011-08-17T20:41:57.476-04:00semi-high gloss v.2...go!semi-high gloss v.2...go!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-25433302891631025432011-08-17T20:28:13.962-04:002011-08-17T20:28:13.962-04:00yeah, IG...I don't care much for it either. I ...yeah, IG...I don't care much for it either. I figured I'd live with it for a while but the more I look at it the more I don't like it. And some of the rhymes are cringey.This poem is like paint...I'll just cover it over and put up something else...I'm just too lazy right now.<br /><br />Go figure.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-87643422972096058812011-08-17T20:17:58.324-04:002011-08-17T20:17:58.324-04:00I liked this, but for reasons unknown to me the li...I liked this, but for reasons unknown to me the line "interior latex histories" made me shudder.<br /><br />Go figure.Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-80807859886475852522011-08-17T16:22:55.010-04:002011-08-17T16:22:55.010-04:00The wonderful fumes - love them and the painted pi...The wonderful fumes - love them and the painted picture(s) they hold.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-22518612599648063132011-08-17T14:39:13.291-04:002011-08-17T14:39:13.291-04:00I love the bathos in the last line, after the pano...I love the bathos in the last line, after the panoply of colours. I guess paint fumes could be psychedelic.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-70924060701514681672011-08-17T12:10:39.291-04:002011-08-17T12:10:39.291-04:00Color Rene lovely ....
the smell of paint made m...Color Rene lovely .... <br /><br />the smell of paint made me sick during my childhood .. I was always sent to my grandparents whenever a painting project loomed.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-72398360580141425102011-08-17T11:18:24.605-04:002011-08-17T11:18:24.605-04:00Sweet with lots of colourful wiffs, too! Vienna Su...Sweet with lots of colourful wiffs, too! Vienna Sunsets sounds so romantic......!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-67098138111195455512011-08-17T10:59:10.043-04:002011-08-17T10:59:10.043-04:00Can we all get together and inhale? Brian, you, Pe...Can we all get together and inhale? Brian, you, Pearl, and me.....ahhhh those were the days....<br /><br />What?<br /><br />No, the people, not paint sniffing....♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-61641097389629821612011-08-17T10:48:31.780-04:002011-08-17T10:48:31.780-04:00We should all be so fumigated...
As the owner of ...We should all be so fumigated...<br /><br />As the owner of two brightly painted duplexes (white walls? Me?!), I'm diggin' this on several levels.<br /><br />And yes. Primer is our friend.<br /><br />PearlPearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05261369905176088917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-12336432604100687462011-08-17T08:04:45.221-04:002011-08-17T08:04:45.221-04:00wish i had that loveliness to fall back on. :)wish i had that loveliness to fall back on. :)Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-11196530528812670392011-08-17T00:45:34.473-04:002011-08-17T00:45:34.473-04:00You've painted all your colours in my mind mos...You've painted all your colours in my mind most beautifully. Thank you.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-76395917835117531442011-08-16T18:13:42.319-04:002011-08-16T18:13:42.319-04:00the colors you conjure up are dreamy, i lost my fo...the colors you conjure up are dreamy, i lost my focus just contemplating them!Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-14873502147426385702011-08-16T16:35:54.564-04:002011-08-16T16:35:54.564-04:00Brian..no actual paint fumes were inhaled during t...Brian..no actual paint fumes were inhaled during the writing of this MagpieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3298264586056295437.post-18990738030536944642011-08-16T16:27:49.470-04:002011-08-16T16:27:49.470-04:00either way its rather nice...but one will give you...either way its rather nice...but one will give you a nasty headache in the morning...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com